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No speaka the engrish
More than half the chapter was just a word for word scene from the show 👎👎👎
Has script type of writing. Don’t read.
Has that horrible script type of writing. Name: hello, blah, blah, blah. Not gonna even try.
F-word number 506 and counting… like seriously, find a new word.
Not a lot of writing mistakes, but bad, border line cringe character interactions. MC seems like an edgelord. Lot of chapters though, so I’m hoping it gets better.
He’s an officer. You need someone to be reasonable, or else it’s just the blind leading the blind 😂
yes👍
Never heard of these domains/abilities of Hades. Are these actual domains or something you add? And if so where did you read about them?