Little_Sapling

The main character is just so - damn - whiny !!! Gods does he ever juststop overthinking on these useless aspects of things. He's a bonafide coward and straight up unlikable. Whining about the miniscule amounts of work he has to do compared to literally every other nen user out there is pretty far from endearing. He's dumb too. I mean, his 'system' will allow him to create multiple nen abilities with extreme ease as his strenth progresses, but does he ever think to make them synergyse with eachother? No, he does not. He just wings it thb. Even then he still whines about having to actually think about what ability he wants his system to whip up for him. He's just such a loser. I can't help, but rant about it a little

I cringed so hard reading this that I might actually have a headache now. A vain and 'pardon-my-french' retarted main character that the author so desperately wants people to think is actually interesting and charismatic, despite EVERY. SINGLE. DIALOGUE. saying otherwise. Awful vocabulary. Awful grammar. Awful pacing. Awful settings and extreme OOC from beloved characters. The only reason I even bothered leaving a review is because this work has a much higher rating then it deserves.

Well that came out of nowhere. I cringed so hard I might actually have a headache now.

It is generic to the point that it becomes boring. In essence, the protagonist replacing our favourite Uzumaki is statedly a master manipulator and schemer of sorts. Unfortunately, in every dialogue he is the very picture of your average 12 year old otaku. Reading it gives me second-hand embarrassment. On the other hand, the moments where he's under the pretext of manipulating people, it's so blatantly and painfully obvious, that all the believability and immersion is gone. It hits all predictable tropes in such a manner that by reading a few chapters you'll already have a rough outline on everything that'll happen from that point on, namely most "issues" and plot points he'll want to change being discribed as following: "Hello, nice to meet you. I'm Naruto. You should/shouldn't do, think or be this way. I'm a genius and smart, so you should follow my advice." "Oh okay, you are now my best friend.". This story loves to pretend that its characters aren't humans with complex desires and intricate personalities, but NPC's with preprogrammed responses. In the end, I think it lacks passion. I've realised I'm ranting now. It's most likely because I'm tired of reading these stories where the protagonist is supposed to be a genius, but thinks and talks like. an. idiot! 2,8 out of 5 and that's only because it is on WebNovel.com.

Screw you despicable author! stop making me laugh at dumb shizzle like this

I laughed a bunch reading this. Thanks man xoxo Ignore whatever I'm writing here, I need the word count. For all that, I am pretty sure you read this anyways dumbass

yes, just ...yes

This entire paragraph had me giggling!

I'm embarrassed that this one got a chuckle out of me imagining Sasuke saying this.