Alef_Biersack

The story so far is interesting, if he is Klaus' son he shouldn't be a hybrid of a sefador and a werewolf, but a canonical character who would be much more interesting, the unborn son of Stefan and Valerie, technically Stefan as a duplicate of a wizard powerful has the potential to be a wizard, since for a duplicate to exist it needs to be a descendant of the original, which in this case is the other species of wizards whose magic was excluded from the universe because it could create true immortality, and one of the ways to make this child of powerful Stefan is to steal Silas's magic, technically Damon should also have the potential to be a wizard since he is also a descendant of Silas or one of Silas' relatives. I don't know if it is necessary to be a direct descendant of the original or if the duplicate can come from a relative who is not a descendant of the original, I finally liked his story but there are very few decent stories from the TVD, TO and legacies universe

I was already a little hesitant because of the MC's main ability, which is a summoning style, which probably makes the MC in itself useless, but now the MC will only have thirty percent of the knowledge, if the knowledge is in chronological order, it means that the MC only remembers one more than the beginning of the story, which means he's barely reached Shippuden in knowledge, all the most important information is almost exclusively at the end of the story. Anyway, I probably won't read this, a reincarnated person without knowledge is useless.

Finally he will be cured, so Batman's actions will have no consequences for him, as he will continue with his routine, he should be trapped naked in a dark room while other heroes take his territory.

I didn't like the MC, he seems to have less IQ than the dog, he sees various elements of the DC universe and still doesn't know where he is, it seems that despite his half-Kryptonian body the MC didn't inherit the brain and I don't like this inconsistency and MC dumb.

DC's most ridiculous invention, the dog with Kryptonian powers, is very ridiculous, and it looks like it's going to be used.

Honestly, it sucks, the author made the MC do the same thing as the original Kai so as not to change anything from the canon, out of nowhere the guy turns into a crazy psychopath, if it was a matter of staying young for the canon he simply could have become a vampire or in the case of a heretic, the MC has no reason to follow the same path as the original Kai.

I don't have patience for this type of MC, the guy just walks around complaining, he knows there's a war coming and doesn't do anything to prepare, apart from this idiocy of inevitable fate, one of the worst types of lazy and stupid MC.

Ok.

No, I wouldn't lose the weight, examples of this in real life and with diets and training specialized in losing weight, everything that Robert doesn't have, plus he hunts in groups and with his weight he probably just finishes the animal and it's not an activity So physically demanding is a hunting party on horseback, a good example of his physical condition is that he got tired going down a staircase to see Lyanna's tomb, and the details of his battle scene as he runs up carrying a body and then fighting enemies using two hammers your resistance should have ended before Jon's, having said all that the story is yours I'm just commenting on what I didn't like or found realistic about his physical condition but hey it's fantasy.

Dude, 6 to 7 months is not even close to enough for someone who lived completely overweight for 14 years, he would need to lose all the fat to start gaining muscle other than through weight training exercises at that time to accelerate weight loss, honestly it's impossible for him being able to fight the way shown in this chapter he wouldn't have as much resistance, speed and strength, and on top of that he fought using two hammers in this chapter which would make him tire even faster, I know you don't want to leave Jon Op but there's no point in doing that if you're going to boost his enemies, the battle itself was good but Robert's discrepancy ruined the chapter for me