KingBing96

I’m really looking forward to more chapters

Do whatever you feel like you can make work in your story 👍🏽👍🏽 looking forward to the chapters

Okie dokie are those some of the powers that got mashed together because they were the same?

So are these his in total powers or are these new powers added to his long list of abilities.

Honestly don’t really see the need for killing Inko. Especially with the last comments about not really knowing him. Dude pretty much grew up again with her as her son. The son she knew and loved was him. No clue why you’re making him go the Batman route. I guess thanks for the chapter. Hopefully the story doesn’t spiral from this point cause it was really interesting.

Well since between all the elders they are suppose to possess all the known 74 legacies I’d say just divide it how you see fit. Plus you could absolutely make up new ones on the fly.

The mix of worlds definitely still works. Honestly adding some movie worlds in as well would be interesting. Like jumper would fit pretty snug in there. I saw another story add it in but they never really expanded on the ability. You could also add the sorcerers apprentice. Cause that could mesh well with the magic side of things. Plus ring over wand every time. As for a snug fit for the supernatural side of things that’s harder to find a good one. Although since it is an AU any lore originally from Lorien Legacies can be skewed. Plus if you did include the jumper ability and he progressively get stronger you could totally make him hop realities to explore.

Honestly definitely looking forward to this story continuing. Will have to give it a reread to jog the memory of it. 👍🏽👍🏽

Thanks for the chapter. Ah but the bane of every readers existence the cliffhanger.

Glad this one is back in rotation looking forward to more chapters. Also you could probably condense the list of powers down since a lot overlap or are the same. Plus he’s got the power to fuse some powers together you could just strengthen the merged powers. Also just saying if his jumper powers evolve you could totally go in the portal direction like in wakfu. That MC had some interesting ways of using his abilities.