Great_Young_Master

He's busted now.

Actually, because 6'2 "is quite close to 6'3, I'd say he is, but because 6'3 "is a weird number, I'd round it up to 6'5 feet.

I do believe you with the 1000 members, but I just can't believe those 1,000 members that did that. But it's not my money so I can't do anything about that. The only thing I can tell you is to not disappoint those people for paying you money.

You need to stop with these fake chapters. More importantly, stop making readers decide on things that'll literally make or break your story. You need to make a rough graph or something because it doesn't seem like you really know what you're doing due to you asking advice from your readers. You have a patre(n but you haven't shown through your writing why people should pay for your story when we barely see any of it. I recommend reading "One Piece: White Hunter", "Path of Power". These two stories alone could easily earn a lot of money but they written for free by their authors. If your story their level then I could see why people would pay for your patre(n but I can't see your story being anywhere their level right now. You can always prove me wrong. Hopefully you can see this as an encouragement to do better from now on.

OK, this is actually pretty good. Definitely much better than other Blue Lock fanfics out there.

The best thing about Shadow Slave is that there's always something significant that happens at the end of the arcs. Whether people like them or not, at least the author is doing something that other authors in similar genre don't really do.