Primordial_Origin

Based on the comments I guess most readers liked the ending. I on the other hand has mixed feelings about it but leaning more on not liking the ending. After all this makes all death during this fight more or less meaningless. All of those who died and sacrificed their lives only for the big bad and their supposed time sensitive mission to get away and fail in the end. What happened to the localized problem turning into a sector wide problem? And for what, to get another high and thrill for the next fight?? Wherein the enemy would be stronger and smarter thereby resulting in more deaths. Feels a bit tasteless in my opinion. Looking forward to see where this leads to to. Thanks for the chapter!

Bloody mary this, bloody mary that. All chapters with her on it is meh at best. Too much focus on a not so compelling side character. Not sure how will she fit in with mc's current circle given her deranged personality and full on villain type compared to the more on anti-hero type of mc's group.

On Chapter 86 it was mentioned that the mission is time sensitive because Gorblasta is about to ascend as a Prime Ork. But on this chapter it looks like Gorblasta already ascended. So, which exactly is it? Or has several months already passed from the briefing 2 chapters ago?

I'm quite new to the 40k lore and universe but in my opinion this was perfectly cooked. Awesome writing author. Looking forward to more!

Huge respect to author. Wishing you the best. Keep being awesome and thanks for the chapter!

Hope you fully recover soon author. God bless. 🙏

The ending was really rushed but it doesn't change the fact that overall this is easily one of the best and well crafted Naruto fic. Anw, I'd say better a rushed ending than a no ending due to the author dropping it. Thanks for translating this story for us.

The story surely has its ups and downs but overall I enjoyed it very much. Thank you for writing this story. Looking forward to reading more stories from you.

Talk no jutsu Jiraiya to go to the darkside? That's impossible for someone with Jiraiya's will and morals. If might guy could live on happily despite lossing his legs how could Jiraiya could not? Doubt it especially given it was his choice that lead to him being crippled. Thanks for the chapter!

Wow. A very well written side character OC. What a great read it has been so far. Looking forward to more. Thank you so much for translating this masterpiece. Easily one of the best naruto fiction there is. Thanks for the chapters~