Marx_Cipriano

great, now I don't have to worry about another protagonist going down the path of pathetic and lame human body

first of all compare a human body and a dragon body humans have pathetic bodies and it's definitely not a good thing for him to turn into something as pathetic as a human body and human are not special

this is quite relaxing and entertaining to read I expected it to be boring, but I'm surprised at how relaxing it is

Good enough, good characters I like the story But there are some problems Too many unnecessary bits and too unnecessarily slow Like, it's satisfying to see crafting in detail, but it's repetitive and boring. It repeat in a cycle until there's no more joy in reading him craft things You should know when to write detail and when to NOT write in details Sometimes it's better to skip things and not focus on them You should know what parts of the story are not needed

Unfortunately

I stopped reading the moment he basically just became a glorified fuck stick

(What I'm writing is my personal perspective over the progress of the story) Story is good What I don't like is the sudden shift of the mc's character into a lustful character That part of him is not well written and doesn't fit much into the story, it is a bit forced and unnecessary I used to like him, but man it didn't do him justice It's unbearable sometimes We don't need sex scenes, we need actual story and actions You're going far from the focus you set for yourself Frankly i find him unfaithful to his partners and the harem is turning from good to unbearably terrible

Just a note, too much hormones will ruin this fan fiction

Noice

Ohhh my -sigh-