Kade_1u1
Languages that i’ve studied: English(80%) Spanish(100%-Native spaker) Japanese(3%😂) Lenguajes que he estudiado: Inglés(80%) Español(100%-Idioma de nacimiento) Japonés(3%😂) I just wanna write 1-1.
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Kade_1u12yrตอบกลับถึง Kade_1u1Forget what i said, the bells were the system notifications.
I only had one thought in my mind accompanied by a bell.- Kade_1u12yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
"I dont want to die again" Said Subaru without using Stealth tactics.
Subaru: "Get ready, I won't leave one of you ..." I said angrily, I didn't want to die again. it was the worst experience of my life, and it was killed or be killed ... - Kade_1u12yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
Real stat: -5
INTELLIGENCE: 10 - Kade_1u12yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
This have to be higher, Subaru had his physical stats balanced.
AGILITY: 10 - Kade_1u12yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
Stats*
[STATE] - Kade_1u12yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
The "That" on this sentence is not necessary.
And remember that everything was the worst. - Kade_1u12yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
Bruh, if you don't want to die, then don't be so stupid.
I was about to cry, dying is something traumatic. - Kade_1u12yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
Okay, tu MC es bastante... tonto. Espero que esto se haya hecho para un futuro desarrollo de personaje, ya sabes, quitar la impulsividad, aumentar su percepción e inteligencia, esas cosas. Porque si tengo que ver a tu MC siendo estupido el resto de la historia, voy a tener una aneurisma 1u1
Until I finally managed to remove his right eye by putting my fingers in the eye socket and pulling back. - Kade_1u12yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
Un poco demasiado apresurado, ademas, disminuye mucho sus posibilidades de encontrar a Emilia si se queda en una pequeña zona de la ciudad. Si no tuviese la armadura de trama de todo MC, probablemente tendría que suicidarse antes de terminar el día por miedo a que Emilia haya sido asesinada y un nuevo punto de guardado le impidiera salvarla. Ademas, habría preferido un Sistema mas generalizado y que solo las habilidades puedan nivelar, el Sistema de Solo Leveling tiene algunas características no muy compatibles con el constante viaje en el tiempo, por ejemplo; Si realizas los ejercicios todos los días, ¿tus estadísticas físicas se reinician después de tu muerte? ¿puedes almacenar los puntos de estadísticas entre muertes? ¿Tu nivel se mantiene? ¿Las mazmorras se reinician? etc, etc, etc. En fin, te recomendaría agregar mas detalles. Cosas como la reacción de los ciudadanos al verlo hacer ejercicio, sus pensamientos sobre las chicas gato, su sorpresa al ver la magnitud de esto:
Ch 1 Re:Leveling [Edited] - Kade_1u13yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
I don't really like what you are doing here, there is a lot of intervention from the god. Messages were close to be disgusting, but appearing in the world is way too much.
"Disciple Xiao Che greets Master Orion." - Kade_1u13yrตอบกลับถึง JB_Hardy
I remember Xiao Lie having some powerful friends who might know that.
Xiao Lie was gaping like a fish at Xiao Che. All the while Xiao Lingxi was wide eyed. Xiao Lingxi was surprised that Xiao Che had Heavenly God's Spiritual Veins. Truth be told, She had no idea what Heaven God's Spiritual Veins actually was. She heard her father, Xiao Lie saying that her Little Che had 54 profound entrances opened. She had managed to interpret that to understand that her Little Che could cultivate. - Kade_1u13yrตอบกลับถึง Charan56
Dumb Dialogues, something you have to get used when reading ff.
"Yo, Dude. Can you tell me what am I doing here?", I asked him. He stopped drinking and immediately looked back at me. I suddenly felt my back getting drenched with sweat. He said," Wow, Man! You got guts. Not every can meet God and go 'Yo Dude!'." - Kade_1u13yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วCh 4 Chapter 4
- Kade_1u13yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วCh 2 Chapter 2