Vanbun

There a lot of typo using he and she in the same sentence and it a bit hard to follow. At one point it’s lent he charter was having conversation, but on the other hand assumed that the storyline. Hopefully you’ll be able to fix those.

Clearly Ouyang tan like Qiao Fei for a long time… probably even when she was his friend’s fiancé. Feel like it’s somewhat messed up then again Tan probably never did like her

Why does he like her so much? And miss Qiao definitely know him and his preference

So confusing… what does he want? So much misunderstanding that’s it a bit annoying.

Good job author! Story is interesting so far and I wish there more to continue reading! Please update more often! :)

Felt like it hasn’t end… it seem like it’s missing something still

This couple move fast! why does it feel like the author is just trying to wrap up everything and not rrally going into detail…

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

Another unfinish story that said complete…. Will they ever complete this comic

Lol he gave a a definition