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«First chapter spoilers. Read the review at your own risk.» I read the first chapter. First impressions? The stages of grief are portrayed accurately throughout the chapter. Leia goes through disbelief and denial when learning about the death of her mother and then enters the raging stage. Good illustration, I'd say. One thing that I'm thankful for is the lack of spelling errors or grammatical errors. All in all, I'd give this a 8.8 out of 10, based on the first chapter. So for all of you who’re wondering if this is worth it to read, I'd say based on what I've gleamed so far? Go for it! And for why I've given this a 8.8 rating, it's because of the pacing. Everything is happening so quickly, first Leia’s mother dies, she goes and gets drunk, goes into her father’s mansion and starts smashing his expensive cars. All in one chapter.
I think you’re missing the point. Being underground is very damaging for one’s mental health, even with oxygen and artificial light. It’s not easy at all. I mean, don’t you often wonder why some people get depressed when they have no friends, are locked up in their own rooms, and curtains closed? This is basically the situation the protagonist is in. I very much doubt the author will try to write about the physiological damages that would get inflicted to a person who’s locked up underground (most authors don’t), artificial light, and no human contact (assuming the locked up person doesn’t have a system). I’m just saying, most people who are given imaginary situations often think It’s easy until they experience a snip.
Comments like these are what remind me that some people are just straight up simple.
Ah yes, a hurricane of nature ain’t that big of a deal.
If you don't understand something, ask right away and I'll do my best to explain.
If it wouldn't be too much trouble, please do erase the review. I don't want to build my story's reputation and fanbase on unhonest reveiws.
No problem! Thanks for the review!
I‘m in this story and I don‘t like it. Someone tell the author he‘s going to expect my lawyer soon. A sue is in due, gentlemen!
This novel is extremely written! Minimal grammar and spelling mistakes, and apparently the author has already planned all of it!? I don't see why no one would not want to read this!