i just read it initially because it was free. But I have to say it's got me hooked. will wait another 3-4 months to come back and read. it's a pain waiting for updates

as much as we love a well explained fight sequence, if there is no epiphany moment or system help here, I think this is gonna go for days. totally don't appreciate it . it's more like those filler episodes in anime[img=angry]

it's really good read. keep it up . I have read various Hollywood themed works, yours ranks right up with the top ones .

this is a proper fiction rather than fanfiction I must say. excellent characters, development and background . definitely worth a read .