Pragmatico

Keep the names right you need to edit this chapter but didn’t pay to read incorrectly translated words

What is the PS about?

Begging her father

So far I enjoyed the story. Updates aren’t daily but at least every few days. Story progress fast at times and slow at others to accommodate the MC and build the world up as it progresses. Grammar is good especially for this app. Want a little more world building in the sense of the galaxies nearby and other cosmic powers that be but I understand the MC has explored to much yet. Character design is unique or I haven’t read or heard of anything like this yet good luck

Never pack a chest wound seal it from the outside

I want pay for a chapter if the last part of a chapter is repeated at the start

Repeating paragraph

There is only one USC. Go Cocks

The story and world building has potential. Grammar is decent as well with stable updates so far. Biggest issue is unnecessary over explaining simple concepts to add word count to already short chapters. As soon as I see it’s three paragraphs explaining something anyone who has ever played a game knows I skipped ahead. Also combat and fights is extremely lacking after the first slime fight. MC also is written as a smart guy while doing stupid things like having his world shattered by simple concepts like a giveent hiding things from people. Who could have thunk it. Dialogue is also very basic and we haven’t seen any growth in the MCs character so far. Very slow paced with a lot of extra words after nothing but fluff to the story

This doesn’t make any sense. Is he gonna pull out a book mid fight and learn a skill what down side is there to learn it in advance. So far doesn’t seem like there is a skill number restriction please explain