Pragmatico

Read what was free: quality of the story is decent and updates seem stable. World background isn’t expanded on to much besides the basics but at least it gives some details. MC isn’t very likeable or relatable for me. He does go through a lot sure but the way it written makes it sound like it’s nothing just another day so you don’t feel like the story is on edge. He just somehow is strong enough to fight strong people even in odd situations. MC is victim to many cliches of the dark genre without much creativity used. Not for me need a sense of personal growth even if it’s a villain character to stay hooked

Maybe if he was passive and went on a hunt for the bone race he would have more points with all this intelligence you boost about he is pretty brain dead so far

Why hasn’t he used his ai to see what is going on?

Should be tortured

Killing home without letting him even put up a fight like someone with brain cells and working on a time clock

Why is there random lines disconnected from there sentence throughout the story

Why can’t I see all the comments??? Also what two year old is walking and talking and playing better yet sitting up on their own. Is mc handicapped or has the writer never read or been around a developing baby

He should be walking and talking already but he is mentally handicapped because he is still sleeping eating and shitting himself lol

Really need more chaps :( hope all is well

I wouldn’t