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Daoist490051

Daoist490051

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  • Daoist490051
    Daoist4900516 months ago
    Commented

    Always start the paragraph with capital letter

  • Daoist490051
    Daoist4900516 months ago
    Commented

    Why are do you keep referring to the maid using male pronouns. I don't feel like reading this anymore. It's too exhausting.

  • Daoist490051
    Daoist4900516 months ago
    Commented

    Pronoun "I" should always be capital

  • Daoist490051
    Daoist4900516 months ago
    Commented

    Please makeup your mind about whether to use male or female pronouns to refer to his first life and stick to it instead of mixing things up like in this sentence. I think it is more suitable to refer using the female pronouns when the body is female.

  • Daoist490051
    Daoist4900516 months ago
    Commented

    Please fix the pronouns. This is already the third time male pronoun were used where female pronoun was needed

  • Daoist490051
    Daoist4900517 months ago
    Posted

    This just a translation of the novel 猎艳江湖 by 天地23 (Hunting for Beauty by Heaven and Earth 23). Honestly google translation seems to do a better job at translating the novel than this. Search for 猎艳江湖 in the site uaa004.com using google translate

  • Daoist490051
    Daoist4900517 months ago
    Replied to Ahmed_Koroma_1382

    This just a translation of the novel 猎艳江湖 by 天地23 (Hunting for Beauty by Heaven and Earth 23). Honestly google translation seems to do a better job at translating the novel than this. Search for 猎艳江湖 in the site uaa004.com using google translate

  • Daoist490051
    Daoist4900517 months ago
    Commented

    Now this is just broadcasting the use of chatgpt. It isn't a good impression to see this right at the start. Using AI is alright but at lease try to make it not too obvious.

  • Daoist490051
    Daoist49005110 months ago
    Replied to Spirit_Immortal

    well I'm in. Your logic is broken though. If yuri (sharing) is ntr then harem (which is also sharing from the women's side) is also ntr. Then you should avoid harem novels altogether. ntr involves lack of consent.

  • Daoist490051
    Daoist49005110 months ago
    Replied to nemly3

    I read the web version and the issue is still there. Specially I read the ebook generated by WebToEpub browser extension which works on the free chapters (the table of contents needs to be visible for it to work for webnovel.com). So I wouldn't go out of my way to read it using the mobile version.

    This book has been deleted.