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God I hate that bozo nfirea

Nfirea is like. The single worst character to ever exist. He is so awful and Enri is actually kinda a girlboss Chad. Here’s hoping they don’t end up together, that guy can stay in the friend zone forever.

Fith is cute

This was a year ago. But reading your first chapter it starts with the MC being shocked he was “in the body of a child”. Meaning he’s an adult. Try to keep up with your own writing.

Mf thinks she’s suddenly in that Sherlock Holmes scene. Yikes

Yeah I looked at that earlier and it’s surprisingly well written. But just not for me. I’m fine with female MC’s if it’s yuri, but a male love interest just kills it for me.

Cute. Though god I hope there’s no romance subplot with him lol. Tsundere older brother seems much better. Lefiya would be kinda cute……

Zero two is great