NYX531

are you trying to create a dence type mc?

author sometimes it won't be a mistery just because you say it's a mistery.you always says mistery this mistary that I know you want to make she like a misterous person but you are using it too many times and doesn't feel like a mistery because most of the readers already know she is a vamp and by you saying very little thing she does as a mistery it doesn't workout well.i hope the novel gets better as I read.

at this point it feels as if he is indentelly avoiding this topic. I mean if you read that much comics and all the first thing that comes to mind when he saw all those things would be she is a vamp.even if jokingly he would think that instead of some mosquito.

why is every little thing narrated like it's a big thing?. why just why is the secrets of the universe in a car backlight?. what next will her eyes tell you about the existence of blackhole [img=disgusted]

well there is nothing wrong to general reader's but for people who are into these fields it comes of as clinge as no one buys like that and he is not really rich just 100k but if he is only using 20% then it's not really that much of a money to be buying rare comics, dresses etc.if you really want rare comics there are a lot that are way above 100k so it's like he is a noob trying to be a pro and i personally don't like that type of wannabe character. And let's be real if you really receive 100k I won't spent it the moment i receive it mainly it's suspicious and she is someone powerful if I have to return it what will i do? i will wait atleast 2 days before spending

did this become a Alchemist novel?

so I don't understand why making a school is such a big deal did you forget there is already accademys in this world though they work like sects and the number of Alchemist is very less and the ingredients are expensive so instead of teaching every one to become Alchemist isn't it better to have talented people as disciples and give them more resources.you have to understand to become an Alchemist you have to understand human physiology then learn to control fire properly then learn about medicine then plants then about beasts and some even need to learn about minerals and it's all a waste if your not rich and let me ask you how many people can do it? if you make a school where will you place it?can normal people travel from all over the continent?if you make multiple school will there be enough students because you need fire and wood with spiritual talent to be Alchemist so in this way it's just stupid and not practical.

it's like using Aura .you can infuse it or not depending on your need.eg you can swing a sword casually and create strong wind but if you infuse aura the power will be incomparable to before it's the same here with qi.he can make space crack with only physical power but if he use qi it will be more powerful.

same here

i don't understand why there is a need for vergence here they didn't do anything other than kicking him out and even the maid to take care of him when he was unconscious.ill say isn't just ignoring them and treating them like strangers all he has to do?if they try to harm you then retaliate but tere is no need to go out of your way for revenge here