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MC stops being a complete idiot after chapter 10. Story changes for the better. Overall, it's intriguing.

I don't believe there would be so little feeling about his child being body snatched like that, but whatever.

Yeah, at level 100, players would have a total stats of 2400. I get it that monsters are probably stronger at the same level but still, alex has way more than 2400 stats, he has that in spirit alone.

System says it's going to take 3 days to upgrade and doesn't update for like a month. At least 70 chapters pass before the system appears again. Not to mention, the MC is so ridiculously stupid and useless without the system. With literally all the signs in the world that Bai Susu's parents are going to harm her, (considering the fact that the parents suddenly switch from being cold and forcing her to do thing, to saying that they wouldn't force her and that they love her.) Honestly it was a nice read before it reached 95 chapters.

He tells his squad about his system, which is one of the biggest taboos of any system novel. If you can get past that it's a good concept.

Had high hopes, until the dude transforms into the batmobile because of the system, plus is scared of bane for no reason since he doesn't have the no gun rule, he could just ambush him with a bazooka. Stupid

Very good story so far, great world building and although at first I was off put by the mc not personally joining in the fights, I came to like the concept.

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I don't understand why Silver would risk Ishtar using Haruhime when he could just move her out of the city with teleportation and leave her with his family?

One of the better fan fics on this site. Overall, a good read, slow paced and well built. Good story but not too much world development. Also weird that mc was so worried about some tests at school but then completely disregards school after fighting against task master. Anyway, it is an enjoyable reading experience and the writing quality alone helps this fic.