James_loren

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How does he know all this

didn’t he just say he’ d do this missions alone

Month*

and also do not due

Could’ve worded that a lot better too for example “this must’ve been your first time fighting a curse user, we’ll get used to it because …ect”

Could’ve worded that better like “I’m going to kill you and that little girl to send a msg…ect…” obviously write msg properly but yh

When using this - make sure it’s connected for example ‘kami-sama’ makes it smooth and if it’s it can come off as stumbling on your word or hesitating

You should’ve put the comma between “i see” and “continue” and this was meant for the other chapter but you’ve put ‘two’ instead of ‘too’ twice last chapter apart from that you’re improving just need to be more careful wit h grammar and punctuality you’re writing will get better over time so don’ rush it

I swear you Batman meatriders will do anything but fault him