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Except that Shisui can give a new command after the cooldown ends, however Lelouch can not give a second command.

Actually this is a foreshadowing of a possible idea of mine. (If i go ahead with the idea then this will be useful otherwise this will stay here as a problem statement)

Actually this is a foreshadowing of a possible idea of mine. (If i go ahead with the idea then this will be useful otherwise this will stay here as a problem statement)

I was kinda getting the hang of writing novels so there are a lot of problems in the book. but you can still enjoy the book as it still has a great storyline

Yup

Yeah, In the anime it was like that (Orochimaru talking to Young Itachi at the funeral and later spying on his training tells that he belonged to the Village at that time.) However, in this fan-fic orochimaru betrayed because or Johan's Meddling (I will talk about it later)

This will happen in the sequel to this Novel.

Sorry Man. I just put that name there for reference of sorts and forgot to change it before publishing😅😅

Thank you for the review. Will keep it in mind in the new chapters[img=recommend]

If the news of such equipment that is too different from the mainstream appearing in a poor village spreads, Abyss might be the least of their worries.[img=recommend]