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CrummyBread

CrummyBread

Lv4

meh

2019-07-19 เข้าร่วมแล้วUnited States
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การเขียน

182.9h

ของการอ่าน

362

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6

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    CrummyBread2yr
    ตอบกลับถึง Bielzin3567

    Yes.

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    CrummyBread2yr
    ตอบกลับถึง LordValmar

    This one is good for me

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    CrummyBread2yr
    ตอบกลับถึง 3RR0R_404

    Yeah, it was my mistake. I should've tripled check but I guess it slipped under my nose.

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    CrummyBread2yr
    ตอบกลับถึง LordValmar

    The author tag could be detached and the Title is fine as it is.

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    CrummyBread2yr
    ตอบกลับถึง LordValmar

    This one is really sick dude! I like this one most since it's showing him overlooking a city. The only thing that doesn't stick with me is my name on the cover and the I.S.T in Elemental {ist}. The color looks too dark in these three letters and I could barely see it. But other than that, everything looks great. Thanks for the hard work😁

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    CrummyBread2yr
    ตอบกลับถึง LordValmar

    I think for the background, an urban city would be great. And for the title, I would probably choose MHA - Elementalist. It seems smooth enough for me.

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    CrummyBread2yr
    ตอบกลับถึง LordValmar

    The concept on the left is good but the landscape doesn't appeal to me. About the title, it probably is one of the ones you suggested but I'm still thinking about that.

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    CrummyBread2yr
    ตอบกลับถึง LordValmar

    I was thinking of an image of a hooded figure with MC's hero costume (doesn't have to be the exact same but something similar) I wouldn't want his appearance to be seen, only the back of his costume. While the 4 main elements are revolving around him. It doesn't have to be detailed and simple is fine. Thanks again for the help👍

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    CrummyBread2yr
    ตอบกลับถึง SINGLE_SOUL

    Yup, but that will happen when they return back to Zhonghai.

    Ch 77 Chapter 76
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    CrummyBread2yr
    ตอบกลับถึง LordValmar

    I will think about your suggestions since I know my title is pretty generic. My naming sense has never been good so this really helps me. About the cover art, I'm still looking for one but none has gotten my appeal so a cover would help a lot. Thanks.

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    CrummyBread2yr
    ตอบกลับถึง notlair

    You think so? It's only been 2 years since he's got his quirk and he needed to train each of his elements along with his body. I also don't like nerfing but if you think so, I'll try to fix it in the future.

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    CrummyBread2yr
    ตอบกลับถึง Randomguyno1

    I was thinking of using his water element on nomu but he already showed 3 of his elements to the villains. Although MC doesn't care if he shows his 4 main elements, that only applies to the hero side. I don't want his enemies finding out so soon. Especially when he's not strong enough to defeat Nomu, All for One, etc.

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    CrummyBread2yr
    ตอบกลับถึง ItsNotTheMoon

    Do you mean Jiro?

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    CrummyBread2yr
    ตอบกลับถึง ItsNotTheMoon

    As I was writing this, I came to the same conclusion. I just didn't want MC to be tied to anything and he still couldn't let go of his past. I know I should've made him younger when he was abandoned but I didn't want to time skip by a large margin. So I chose 2 years before his UA entrance so he can train. About his personality, he won't always stay like this. It's part of his C.D. and it won't take him long to mellow out.

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    CrummyBread2yr
    ตอบกลับถึง Commissar

    Maybe. I still need to lookup more information so I don't know for sure

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    CrummyBread3yr
    ตอบกลับถึง QueenOfMean

    Yes.

    (AN: Don't bash me lol. If MC accepted her then and there, he'd be no different than the original Yang Chen. Like I said before, Jane will be in the Harem but I'm not going to rush it. This will also be beneficial for the future Harem members:)
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    ตอบกลับถึง Randomguyno1

    Nope

    The only reason she had decided to raise her kid was because that child was from "that" man. She was hoping when her son would get older, he would awaken a powerful quirk and take her out of this poverty life.
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    CrummyBread3yr
    ตอบกลับถึง asia_fsjsu92926

    Tbh, I don't even know. I'm just going with the flow of the story. The only one confirmed is Jane and Seventeen for now.

    (AN: Don't bash me lol. If MC accepted her then and there, he'd be no different than the original Yang Chen. Like I said before, Jane will be in the Harem but I'm not going to rush it. This will also be beneficial for the future Harem members:)
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    CrummyBread3yr
    ตอบกลับถึง MAGE_OF_FLOWER

    Don't worry, he will use it. Just not on some ordinary cannon fodder lol

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    CrummyBread3yr
    ตอบกลับถึง NebulousArcana

    To be honest, I was having trouble with what quirk MC would possess. I wanted him to have a strong quirk but also wanted him to work hard in training it. I also wanted an element that could heal his injuries. But I didn't do enough information and went with light. If I had known about biokinenesis, I totally would've gone with that. Your idea of becoming a doctor also intrigued me. MC can make a lot of money and gain a lot of fame with that. But I had already written these chapters and I can't change it. Thanks for your advice and I hope you find a good story to read. By the way, I still might think about your idea in the near future 👍

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