Aozora_Ai

Yeah, it's like reading a messy beginner's fanfic. Maybe for me the characters are too childish and the writing is too messy. Maybe because I've seen better system fanfics so if I see the bad ones I can already see them. Well, for me, this fanfic has no potential, it's just to fulfill the creator's wishes. Touch the grass bro!

Oh it turns out too many predictions are not good, I think at least the main canon for Bruce Wayne still applies to show that no matter how much preparation you make you can't escape fate and Bruce becomes a cooler Batman in my opinion with Tony Stark's memories. Yeah that's what I thought it turned out to be too good to be true!!

Good superman fanfic, but I feel like I've seen it on fanfiction.net or is it a coincidence? But keep up the enthusiasm for the update and don't slack off, at least 2 chapters a week, you'll definitely be able to do it.

Very uninteresting. Yes, that's the word that came to mind, I initially had the expectation that Mc would be born in Japan and train in martial arts, ninjutsu, and so on for several years and then go straight to America because his parents had work to do. At least the plot is more interesting if we don't follow the straight line of canon and create a more interesting background rather than bragging to someone else that he is someone who can see the future. Seriously you make stupid stories and boring slice of life. Yeah that's all!!

Dude, don't you know that the genin team was formed by the Hokage? why are there genma and aoba who are basically not academy teachers? try watching Naruto or read the manga carefully.

Ugh sorry dude, this Tony Stark isn't to my taste. At least I like the development of the technology and Mc doesn't waste his time. It's just that the problem with this fanfic is the romance (a planned and strange harem) and too many time skips. I stopped reading when Tony Stark met the Ancient One and he called her "wife" and was sure Tony loved her very much. Come on, seriously, bro, do you like bald women who are hundreds of years old?? Very unreasonable. That's all!!

Interesting fanfic!! Even though the MC has a rubbish system, in my opinion the story planning is very neat, and also please continue the hard work. Thank You!!

This is a pretty good Ghost Rider story in my opinion, the only drawback in this story is that the complexity of the system is not really explained here and the Marvel world where the MC is located is not very detailed and an example is after fighting a villain and suddenly the system wants to send him to another world, and the author did not explain the aftermath of the battle. Yeah, that's the downside in my opinion, please make the story a bit more complex and don't forget the aftermath. Thank You!

So far the story is still fun to follow and the writing and setting of the story are very good! I recommend it for those who want to read good Fate fanfic. Thank You!

I would not recommend this fanfic, because the story is so flat and there are no changes to Ishigami Yu and instead follows the original plot. Even having a system is a bit useless and actually ruins the story even more. Thank You!!