LiLBoyHatake
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Yea theres 0 depth to her rn
No inspection of the property? Didnt even look at the financial model of the business?
This doesnt make sense, he has had a good atitude for the last 18 chaps. Throwing this in so quickly just makes it seem like ur scrambling for some type of conflict
Please use past tense!!!!
Really cliche sl far. Already forgetting the main plot is that the MC idles and becomes op.
They arent even out of highschool, and have never hung out outside of school. Its not love, its an obsession
Hes gone 3 days without sleep and is injured. I think the spaniard would win.
I love the novel, I am currently at Ch 80, and it appears that the Mc is losing what made me interested in him in the first place. He is starting to help for no reason like a valiant hero, and the author keeps saying that he lacks empathy and the such, but its very clear that he’s helping people just to help. I am mostly wondering if he goes back to being ruthless or if he stays like this.