The Atom Controller Lucien

Reading the beta version of this, I can safely say that It definitely looks interesting and has quite a lot of potential. The starting seems a little slow but it's not that slow. Just a couple chapters in, and it already reaches the crucial part. I would say definitely worth your time.

It looks promising. Good start with an interesting concept. I'm a stan of OP anyways so that's another plus. Author also had many other projects, the good thing is that they always finish every project they start. All of that combined, A 5 star it is for now

5 or 6 more probably/hopefully, definitely not more than that

Other than Dragon and Shadow, I mean the rest of them.

At 100th floor, yep

All I can tell you is that people from one piece don't know about stuff from solo leveling world for now.

Can't deny that there were better ways to go about it in the Smoker fight. Welp, the plan is to not to do that from now on cuz it is kind of repetitive and redundant

Well, I do agree with you there. Jin Woo doesn't talk that much, he is someone who would go for the throat first before speaking anything. But here is the thing, in this moment, he knew he was no match for Arlong, and so was only acting, trying to rile him up and lure him into the trap. He said all those things so arlong would lose his short temper and don't notice his plan. Again, it is something that I wasn't able to show properly

well, I'm gonna blame you then...since u made the dungeon Kekw

why would a potion even have the metal cap?

bleed wot bro. get help

kek, that looks fun. the problem is also solved, although it was a bumpy ride. Mc should have just enjoyed the whole thing. As a wise man once said, "If you cannot prevent r@pe, you enjoy it."

that was a surprise but not a bad one...might as well enjoy it fully. . I'm rather more focused on the fact that he's going on a world tour at age of 10 from being house locked.

just accept it and enjoy

-"It's at half power" Remember what world mc is in? MHA, where city level is the maximum u would be finding. He can literally clap everyone in MHA with just a little bit of time. -Gamer System isn't all about mana, though it does makes up most of it, there are other martial arts skill that use Ki, and going by pure physical stats, it won't be difficult for mc to even become as strong as All Might with time honestly. -"cant level up" I believe that problem is almost solved in this chapter? Since he'd be leaving to travel and all so I don't see the point of mentioning this

even if she does grow fast, all she can catch up to him is in quirk department, Mc still has the other cheat, gamer system so she can't possibly catch upto him.

DEITY* but same thing