IlliterateOne

How little siblings be calling after getting bullied.

They're really speedrunning the crap out of this relationship.

it's kinda dumb that the other two templates affected the mc's background settings in this world, but the JR one didn't.

Finally!!!

Why do all of the action scenes happen behind the scenes. There's more scenes of him singing and bumping uglies than throwing hands, and the dude has f'ing Jack Reacher's combat prowess. This is such a waste of a good plot device.

This whole chapter reminded me of a short I watch called "When you return a souls-like game"

These types of fics always degenerate into celebrity obsessed wankfests. Like, why is it that when you can add any character from any franshise into the fic that they always end up adding a real-life person. It always ends up feeling like I'm reading some nerds' dream goon journal. This has the same energy as when k-pop fangirls post stories about wanting to get railed by their favorite boy bands online. it's creepy and pathetic.

Castle is literally my all-time favorite show.

It's more like self-inflicted pressure at this point. A dozen chapters back, he was bragging about already having half a billion dollars in the bank. He has generational wealth, but he's acting like he's on some sort of existential deadline. For example, he already has enough money to retire multiple people multiple times over so he could 100% relax and go forward, treating everything like a hobby.