AllisonKayne1

Good book just needs an editor to fix the grammar

someone needs to fix this. I want my coins back

This is an absolutely great book in everything but grammar. it needs an editor to correct grammar usage and typos. Other than that, I absolutely love this book and the plot so far. I even spent coins and voting on this book.

Good Job!!!! Ren, now that's how you woo someone. I'm so jelly

well rounded

violin. but translation is hard, so things are often wrong in English

You don't call a motorcycle a car. You call it what it is a motorcycle or the slang is a bike. When you say car you confuse people.

I love it the grammar translation is impeccable

It's not a bad book, but there are so many problems with the grammar and writing quality

You mean Huo Xunzhou