Skabold

killer not butcher

plagia of world of adepts. at least the start is the same with a different name. the swamp tower, biochip, the girl that get experimented on by the magus. Mc with fire affinity. The murder at the start .... There is being inspired and stealing a story...

Feel very influenced by World of Adapt and Warlock of the Magus world. hope it will be as good ;) (or better ofc)

voa la -> voilà

hahahaha

the logic of the plot is broken. I rly need to put my brain away to read.

intrusive thought won

half the chapter is the word Kakashi.its repeated every 10 words its crazy.

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one of the best fanfic of harry potter. and i read like a 100 of them over the years.great work.