Average_Daoist

An Exceptional Fanfiction Worth Every Moment This fanfiction is an absolute gem. The story is gripping and full of twists that keep you hooked from start to finish. The characters are brilliantly written, staying true to their original personalities while growing in ways that feel natural and compelling. Even new characters fit seamlessly into the narrative. The writing is polished and smooth, with barely a grammatical error in sight, making it a pleasure to read. What truly stands out are the longer chapters—each feels like three packed into one, allowing for richer storytelling and deeper immersion. If you’re looking for a fanfiction that’s exciting, heartfelt, and beautifully crafted, this is it. It’s a must-read that leaves you eagerly waiting for more.

Summarized: This novel is horrid. By chapter 86, I had to stop due to how flawed it became. The system, a central element, is almost forgotten after chapter 40 and barely matters by chapter 80. Despite claiming no harem, the author suddenly adds two wives around chapter 80+. To make it worse, the dialogue between the girls is unbearably cringe. I couldn’t continue.

impressive riding ur own d-ck is pretty impressive

pure cringe sh*t even.[img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

It's a pretty enjoyable and lovely fanfic. The author's writing skills are pretty good, and the character is pretty great. all in all, i got nothing to complain about.

Trust me, you are totally bullsh-tting my friend.

be decisive mate we gotta know just to see whether to continue with this novel. I hate how authors have no idea themselves . Just say it if u know if u dont f_cking know just say it too.

Good writing quality trash plot and too many clichés .

Time to feast on that cooked right hand 🤣 😂 🤣