Aaron_Seddon_0599

Don't mind the haters this arc is pretty good

thanks for the chapter bnit of advise dont do the full status only do what would be changed you can always add the full status in the author notes at the end of chapter

i dont like that he shackled everyone else to be below him forever instead of making it a challenge for them to surpass the mc so he can evolve further

Thanks for the chapters I have enjoyed read your story immensely. especially the little notes when nothing makes sense

14 with armour

They should never have been able to access his AI undetected alarms should of been blaring as soon as anything connected with how he set everything up and the tech he has access to

I'm still confused on the priesthood bit do you mean divinity or domain because a priesthood is literally a organisation of priests? other wise following the story so far

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im seeing lots of spelling mistakes you may want to give the chapters a once over and sort the mistakes but so far so good

i honestly think this fic should be renamed there has barely been anything with Adam in it an he acting like original Adam as it seems to be adam/heaven bashing fic