MA_Writecrft
Lv4
I like alot of things to anime to fencing and lot of other things I love enjoying food and enjoy making it I don't have any particular talent yet I'm confident but I'm the worst when holding money
2019-05-28 เข้าร่วมแล้วPhilippines
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MA_Writecrft1yrตอบกลับถึง Malcolm_Masseyno I think it would make sense because in there world an ancestor vampire of a family represents that family's strongest member and eldest leader, so if you think it like that then a house or family with a patriarch or matriarch dying would mean that family would either be assimilated or be wiped out cuase there's no other elder vampire in there house or family or clan... I wish I explain it well.
Normally, it shouldn't be like that, after all, Kaguya's ancestor was part of Clan Snow's main house, and he married a noble Japanese Vampire who could control the shadows. But, because of the untimely death of Kaguya's ancestor's wife, the descendants of the noble vampire were left without political support and, because of that, they were demoted to a subsidiary family that exists only to serve the Snow Clan.- MA_Writecrft2yrตอบกลับถึง Boundless_Ancestor
that's true, and false in the same time, you can consider it conciliation prize AZ best.
After hearing those lines, his mind went blank. His world began to crumble into pieces as memories with her started to break down into tiny pieces within his mind. Those happy memories that they shared, the laughter, the love, their first meeting, and the first night they were together. All crumbled into pieces. - MA_Writecrft2yrตอบกลับถึง a_commoner
true that.
"Shin… I… I'm sorry… I'm really really sorry… I know that you love me, but… The truth is… I… I fell in love with someone else. He gave a lot of attention which you could not and what I needed... and he... he is the one that can give me the future that I desired. I'm... I'm so sorry…" - MA_Writecrft2yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
well... She's both a cowered and hoe... his lucky he didn't get hitched with her.
"Shin… I… I'm sorry… I'm really really sorry… I know that you love me, but… The truth is… I… I fell in love with someone else. He gave a lot of attention which you could not and what I needed... and he... he is the one that can give me the future that I desired. I'm... I'm so sorry…" - MA_Writecrft2yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
you could have just called it a laboratory rather than office, I've been into labs before and most of their equipment is machinery, large once in fact, but well it depends on which, type of laboratory your referring to in thus one.
The office where he is in right now is surrounded by modern types of machinery and laboratory equipment. Looking at the window his gaze slowly turns cold and with melancholy slowly displaying in his expression. - MA_Writecrft2yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
hmm... this is to big a paragraph, you should change it in the next iteration of this story, if you want your next story published professionally.
The cold night breeze embraces the people of City H. The snow slowly covers the ground painting the whole city in white. In this modern city where people and cars are bustling about, a young man, tall in structure coupled with a handsome face stood unmoving as if in a trance. His face has a look of shock and disbelief while holding his phone in his hand while listening to the person on the other side of the line. His gaze suddenly became unfocused while facing the wide window sill overlooking the tall buildings of the city outside. - MA_Writecrft2yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
I'll be ruthless, in pointing out the faults, of your writing in a paragraph by paragraph bases, this would help you clean our your old works and help me learn writing my self I wish for the best.
***Author's note: Before reading, I would like to point out that this is my first time ever to write a novel in my life. If you find some chapters annoying please forgive me as I am still learning how to write. However, I like to give my heartfelt thanks to those who are reading this story. Love you guys! Thanks for your support!... - MA_Writecrft2yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
well Damn... fuck! his gonna make a monster.
[Genetic Assimilation Lv. 1: There is no being in the universe with more potential than the parasite. This is not because of their individual strength, but due to their ability to steal all other beings' strengths. Instead of replacing the host for a more suitable vessel, absorbing the genetics of all creatures will allow the parasite to enhance, improve, and perfect a unique body. - MA_Writecrft2yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
the hacker.
("I see you're in a bit of trouble. Don't worry about the camera's they are disabled.") - MA_Writecrft2yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว[Phantom Voices: A scholar of an extinct race once said that the voice you hear behind you with no source is the sound of all the tortured souls in hell. However, the truth is far more terrifying.
- MA_Writecrft2yrตอบกลับถึง Anon_King
no... maybe the MC is the sheffared remember his a goat herder😐😆
The thing he didn't understand is why the AI allowed for such living conditions. This must be some heavily laced threat. Shephard's men took Cindy that day and Matt didn't think anything about it at the time since he wasn't completely aware of how much of a threat Shephard was. However, he never gave her a second thought because of Sheila's death. In his mind, Cindy had betrayed him. Seeing the living conditions of her partner, Matt realized that perhaps Cindy is being held against her will, and they are threatening her partner from saying anything. - MA_Writecrft2yrตอบกลับถึง amir_sarvar
no how about a seer?
"You'll find out one day. When that day comes, you'll pay me back." - MA_Writecrft2yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว("Today, I saw Them for the first time. They allowed me to approach as my offering was meaningful. They wished for me to continue developing my research and return with a finished product. I will satisfy Their will.")
- MA_Writecrft2yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
huh... so she's a lot more epic then.
"Yes, Commander!" The four shouted. The other three left to go store their suits but they already understood the decision Alexis had made. They had frozen in that situation but only Ren had taken action. Matt looked at the girl who helped his wife and was very thankful. The injury she received that made her drop in the rankings consecutively was a lost eye. She wore an eyepatch over her left eye because of it. - MA_Writecrft2yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
yup the noob gear is actually a veterans favorite, far trope is here.
Matt arrived just in time to witness a fight between Alexis and the man in the Pyrotechnician suit. Watching the fight, he realized the gap between them. The 'Space Marine' suit is not simply just the beginner's suit because it is the weakest. In fact, some veterans still use that suit due to its applications. Instead of relying on heavy machinery and explosive weaponry, the suit lets the user utilize their skills and techniques at the highest level. Alexis activated the various features of the suit and was able to run circles around her opponent. She struck at the joints with perfect precision. Matt didn't know when this fight started, but it seemed to be ending quickly. - MA_Writecrft2yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
Damn this... why is a sci-fi building Pugalist? And not mechanics that builds giant iron man suits.
However, the other candidates talked amongst themselves. They noticed that Alexis hadn't even broken a sweat and was able to command them clearly without any signs of heavy breathing in her voice. Everyone else was pushed to their limits. They realized this was not an easy assignment and were even more determined. This was the position of acting-leader, it naturally wouldn't be so simple. - MA_Writecrft2yrตอบกลับถึง Pill_Guy
good to know I've missed that part.
"I am sure you are all aware of the reason I gathered you here today. I will not mince words. For the next few days, you will be undergoing training in the centrifuge with me from morning to evening. If you cannot keep up, you will be disqualified. If you complain, you will be disqualified. I have already called to set the last ring to ten-times gravity. Grab your suits and report in thirty minutes." - MA_Writecrft2yrตอบกลับถึง KGB_Chan
yup makes sense.
The third candidate which Alexis did not recognize was Markus Deville. He was in the middle of rankings almost every time. His personality was normal. His build was average and didn't have anything remarkable about him. Additionally, it seemed that many didn't even know he existed, like Alexis. He was a wall flower wherever he went. Willard's analysis showed that he was over ninety percent not working for Shephard, which was the highest of any other person that wasn't in the captain's faction. - MA_Writecrft2yrเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
damn plus one in party.
"Regardless of how eccentric he is, having him on our side means we are closer to a life without fear of persecution. Shephard will regret bringing us together." - MA_Writecrft2yrตอบกลับถึง DerpyFoxKit
huh... yup my friends the players had just met the inventor of the game.
"Naturally. This was a special occasion since I needed to build your trust. Take these." Willard pulls out a pair of small containers and hands them one to the duo. "Inside is a special device I created myself. Place them on your eyes and we will be able to communicate on a secure channel. Additionally, it has some rudimentary hacking programming and will guide you through low complexity systems."