Everything has a 4 or a 5 star from me but story development and charachter design. I love stories that have the mc working through his personal problems, and becoming stronger due to it. However, this story is a continuous story of the mc getting depression, getting help, then something else happens for him to be more depressed. The whole story is just a cycle of depression the mc deals with and it starts to feel boring.

You seem like a person who only likes characters that are emotionless, and have no realistic factors. If you like that, then just read wish fulfillment, and stop wasting time by commenting with your horrible English.

You live in a world where people can be murdered, but until you see it for yourself you do not understand how much danger you can be in. Icarus knew how powerful the gods are but seeing it for himself made him fear it more.

Yeah, I guess he forgot the whole Camelot incident.

If you have no criticism or positivity you sholdn’t review at all.

I love this fanfic. I binged the whole story after reading the first chapter.

Maybe it’s the author’s first piece of literature. Most authors aren’t that great at writing when they start off.

A year is a long time.

This is stolen work. The original is from Paradox.

This is stolen work.

This stolen do not support It.

The original author is rewriting it.

This is stolen work. Do not support it.

This is a great fanfic and it sucks that it is being stolen.

This is stolen work. Please do not support this man.

Stolen.

Do not read this. This is a stolen story.

This isn’t paradox. This is a dumbass whi stole his work.

Guys post 1 star reviews on the copies.

This is stolen work, as is DaoOfEternities.