Lexi_Roberson

wait what seriously? where can I find it again please? thank you!

I can make out a list of questions that could help you if you want? Just let me know if you want me to.

Again, all I see wrong is the grammar on it. Just make sure you are capitalizing things when writing. I understand if your using a phone, its a lot harder to do on there. I think the story could use a little more flow to it from the previous chapter if you ended it there. Overall it really is good so far! Good luck. :)

I have a question. Is this a short book, or are you going to be adding more to the first chapter? I am just curious. I think it was really good so far. Maybe check on the grammar. I always say use Grammarly, if you can't just make sure some things are capitalized. I seen a few sentences where "She" wasn't capitalized, it looked like this "she" instead of "She". Overall really good on this chapter so far. :)

Hey! Its the girl from tiktok! I added your story to my library! When you have more written down I'll read it and review it for you!

sorry been a like MIA on here!!

I do know what some are those things are! I felt that as I reread it to get a different understanding of how it could be improved. As it is being rewritten those things I thought were kinda glossed over, certain issues that bring the true realism value to my book alive. I would love to hear what you think as well on those complaints. For now I'm considering this a rough draft lol!

Please let me know what those complaints are! Much appreciated!

I will check it out as soon as I can!!!

Yes I am not for sure though. My sister let me borrow her paper copy, but Im sure you can find it on Amazon. Most books are on there anyways lol!!