Lexi_Roberson
Just a young amateur writer
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I can make out a list of questions that could help you if you want? Just let me know if you want me to.
Again, all I see wrong is the grammar on it. Just make sure you are capitalizing things when writing. I understand if your using a phone, its a lot harder to do on there. I think the story could use a little more flow to it from the previous chapter if you ended it there. Overall it really is good so far! Good luck. :)
I have a question. Is this a short book, or are you going to be adding more to the first chapter? I am just curious. I think it was really good so far. Maybe check on the grammar. I always say use Grammarly, if you can't just make sure some things are capitalized. I seen a few sentences where "She" wasn't capitalized, it looked like this "she" instead of "She". Overall really good on this chapter so far. :)
I do know what some are those things are! I felt that as I reread it to get a different understanding of how it could be improved. As it is being rewritten those things I thought were kinda glossed over, certain issues that bring the true realism value to my book alive. I would love to hear what you think as well on those complaints. For now I'm considering this a rough draft lol!
I will check it out as soon as I can!!!
Yes I am not for sure though. My sister let me borrow her paper copy, but Im sure you can find it on Amazon. Most books are on there anyways lol!!
yay!!! let me know when it's comes out!!! I know right!!!
Lol sorry just now replying to this. My mind is so hectic right now. Ok thank you!!! I will hold onto my question further until I see the answer. Lol you mean punctuation??? Sorry grammar girl over here!! Ok, I will be looking into it. I do have a question, when you update a chapter of your story, does it send out an announcement to everyone???
Lol sorry I'm a female so I was like maybe they are a female too??? It's an American novel (I don't know if you live in the starts or not) but I think you could order it. I don't know if you have Amazon, I honestly don't know and just don't want to assume things either. If you do have Amazon you could probably order it off of there!!! Don't get me started on book lists!!!! I'll be recommending them to you all day 😂🤣
Lol well it's clearly there in the writing 🤣😂 good job at that 👏👏
Yes!!! Hopefully we all find someone !!! I'm glad you did!!!
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Not going to lie, I kind of like being the first to comment. As I keep stating over and over how brilliant and well written this author has made this book. I have stated my claims. I thought this one was pretty well written. What more can I say? I think it's pretty brilliant and captivating to read. Frances journey just makes you want to find out more. I am still hoping her and Father Tristan will come together at the end. I also love how the author went from Father Tristan to just Tristan.
Brilliant !!! 👏👏👏
I just like how it went from Father Tristan to Tristan.