Lain_Walker

I can already imagine the reactions when this happens.

I read until Chapter 25, trying to see if the plot will change. But it’s just the same with slight changes to the story - Fairy Tail: Digimon Take Over. The MC just changed from having a Digimon Take Over into someone who has a Bleach Template/Take Over magic. Story follows the same direction which is - arrival > getting powers upon arriving at Fairy Tail > living with Makarov > fighting/befriending Laxus > taking Cana out to explore the Town with Laxus > up to fighting Gildarts, reuniting Father and Daughter… and by the looks of things, the MC will save Ultear, reunite her with Ultear, he’ll fight Deliora with Ur and Gildarts, then he’ll bring Ultear to Mavis to learn Arc of Time Magic. All in all, your writing is good. But copying and changing barely anything from an existing fanfiction story is something else. If you plan on continuing, at least mention that you got the inspiration from somewhere, or like it’s a fanfiction of an already existing fanfiction in this site.

Maybe because he earns 1 dollar per heartbeat. So it’s constantly increasing.

I’m imagining the daughter as Akane Yagyū from Onimusha.