KoroSensei14

Good story still waiting to finds out why they regressed though.

This virus part is a bit annoying as a plot device.

Let’s be honest the Naruto timeline is a mess and makes it super hard to build a perfect one most events don’t have specific years we just know they happened sometime before, during, or after each war.

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Like the story but Why hasn’t Mc told madara about zetsu he already screwed canon might as well get him Izuna, hashirama, and tobirama on board so they can’t be manipulated.

Good chapter you should Include more characters though your forgetting about fried, bickslow, and evergreen who are always around Laxus. Also levy, jet, Droy, Alzack, Bisca, Laki, and max have good potential to don’t know when they join though.

Any ideas on location for his kingdom. Skagos would be a good spot or the stepstones if he wants to be involved with Westeros.

Good story so far felt like your a little to harsh on Rhaenys though.

Like the story it’s a fun read but you should use the Naruto wiki for fact checking sometimes you got the corresponding 7 mist swordsman and the swords they used mixed up.

Probably hagaromo clan