lbaro97
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I am thinking just how bothersome it has to be to say the name of that metal several times in a conversation... 😅
You should calculate that again...
Allright. So if he wins the 3-star challenge, will he get an s-rank Badge?
Just to make sure I am getting this right: Mikail can collect S-rank badges while challenging on a 3 star level? 3 Star meaning he can only use up to silver stage Pokemon? And a 4 star challenge for an s-rank badge would include gold stage pokemon?
That was a good section. The increased amount of interaction between the shelder and Mikail immediately made it more interesting to read.
This is another example of a scene that could have been fleshed out some more. Even if it was relatively easy to subdue them, you could have taken the chance to showcase Hades prowess. Since all battle scenes are always summarized, I honestly don't know how much power a gold or dark gold stage Pokemon has. What exactly are they able to do? How much destruction? How large is the area they can affect with their attacks. You need to add some details, some comparisons, something to visualize it so we, the readers, can imagine it.
When you wrote the battles Mikail was fighting himself (not Pokemon battles) you showed that you can write good battles. Why do you insist on glossing over every single Pokemon battle that has happened so far? I cannot remember a single fleshed out pokemon battle in this whole story... 😕
I don't know how often I have read this paragraph just with different Pokemon... It really needs to be changed a little cause it is getting very repetitive.
What exactly was she / were they looking out for? Some more detail would make this much more immersive.
I would have liked to see a situation like this shown in more detail, not just glossed over... Could have been exciting to read.
600 chapters and the official journey is almost beginning. Meaning, the "prologe" is almost over. 😄 I am looking forward to more. At the same time I am hoping that with the official start of the journey, the author will start to go into more detail with what is happening. More showing than telling. More interactions between characters, and not just with his Pokemon. Less status updates because it feels like especially the last 200 chapters consisted of about 60% status updates with an evolution or breakthrough happening almost every chapter. The MC has too many Pokemon by now to continue like that. It's getting repetitive, so I am hoping the author uses the start of Mikails journey to change the writing a little. That said, I am looking forward to reading more about Mikail's journey. Thank you for writing this story. 😃
I am noticing a KFC addiction there...
It's been too long... What stage are Overlord Pokemon and do legendary trainers have Pokemon on that level?
I had to read that twice because the first time I actually read "burlesque"... Mikael might be a little too young for that kind of covert mission...
A group of Ursaring... And Heracross dispersed them... 🤨
probably starly...?
lol indeed...
Easter Eggs should fit into the story seamlessly making the reader feel like it is familiar from somewhere, then realize it causing him/her to chuckle. In this case it is simply like a punch in the face. Not subtle at all and not fitting either. It ruins the continuity and that is why people don't like it. I suggest not doing something this obvious again. Additionally, if you want to add more Easter Eggs, then they should fit into the timeline.
I like the setting of the story and I am especially looking forward to what happens after the Rocks Pirates disband. One big problem I see with this story is the fact that the the writing / translation quality seems to get worse with every chapter. It starts out allright but as of approximately chapter 70 it really starts bothering me...