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Hey, there. Do you remember me? I've been waiting since then... I see you paused this book to write another one that became more popular. I am happy for you. But, I am really sad this wonderful story wouldn't continue. I wanted to know more about Fei, Carlos, and the others... It was really captivating. I hope you find this reply and assure me that you didn't completely drop this book. I may actually read your new work in the meantime. As always, good luck with everything!
Hey, there. It's been a month already, and I've been checking every other day for a new chapter and... I'll be honest, I didn't see your reply till now and I'm concerned about so many things. I'm quite sad you're putting this wonderful novel to a pause. I really wanted it to know its conclusion. I hope you didn't give it up or something. I'll check your other fictions later when I can and I'm sure they would be just as enjoyable as Crystal and her daily life of mystery. One more thing, and something that's gotten me stressed right now... You said I'm a "super girl." I-I am a guy by the way! I should have said this sometime earlier... I guess I need to change the 3D Anime boy model in my pfp because it's misleading? Ehehe... I hope that doesn't surprise you. I myself am not sure if you are a boy or a girl. But here we all simply write, read, and share thoughts, so genders don't really matter, right? Anyway, I hope you're forever motivated to write. I'll make sure to check your other works later! See you around!
I'm so sorry! I'm so sorry! I'm so sorry! It's been so long since the last time I checked on your novel. I'm so sorry! I'm super busy these weeks, and a lot of stuff is happening. I even stopped updating my own novel due to reasons. Never mind that! I was so worried that you might have discontinued your novel or something. Now, I've caught up! I'm so glad you're keeping it up! I know it's not much, but I hope my comment fuels you with the motivation you need to keep drawing this masterpiece that is your story until its very last chapter. Awesome chapter as always! Crystal is finding the pieces of the puzzle little by little. First, she learned about Sean, then his mother. Now, it's time to connect all these loose strongs!
Just whaaaaaat?! Coincidence? Or maybe there is a connection? Could it be?! That Sean's mother is a Crystal from the future or maybe that Crystal is a replica of Sean's mother?! Hmmm, I don't think it's really the case. I mean... Sean doesn't seem to love his mother in the slightest, so that must not be the reason he loves Crystal. In any case, this absolutely blew my mind! I don't know how many more times you'll make my mind blow again, but I'm looking forward to it. See you in next chapter!
People are comparing her to Shrek? They must think she's really hot XDD By the way, hello again. I know it's been a while, and I probably missed a lot. But, don't worry. I'll be catching up soon!
Fei*
It's sad I'm not going to see more of this beautiful story for a while. I wish the cliffhanger had been more satisfying. But, even so, I'll be waiting. Take your time and come back safe! You've been doing an incredible job ever since chapter one and I know you can keep it up until the end! Good luck. See you around later!
Thanks for the illustration of Fri! It looks so awesome! Although she's a little different from what I pictured it, she looks way more beautiful and mature! I just love it!
That last line was quite a shock! I really can't believe it! But if that really the case, Crystal would have to say something that could change everything. About the change of the PoV, first and foremost, it's yours, the author's choice. But here's my suggestion. If it's about Sean's backstory you could make it as if Crystal was looking into his past or maybe he was simply telling her a story. Or, you can simply state or hint the change in PoV to avoid confusion and that's it. But, either way I don't mind. If you already decided on something and written the chapter, release it as it is. I'll gladly read anything you write. As always, you're doing an awesome job! Keep it up until the end!
Did her hair color change again? Lol just wondering. But, I'm quite sure it's something with her appearance. Maybe not?