daniel_rahn

Gotta say really love the concept of a more confident and op okarun. My only concern is about the love interest, the best part of Dandadan ia the relationship between Okarun and Momo. So the fact thag you are making this like the generic harem novels with a bubch of girls after MC only to see mc end up with just one if them at the end, kinda ruins the OG set up of Dandadan, since in the og they actually end up dating and we still have a lot of story to go, whch diferemciate the manga from other cliches Tho i might be wrong and you will end up following the manga romance plot, with mc dating momo sooner than later. Whcih would be awesome tbh.

Uhh ok? I mean i find weird to ask for a break or you been stressed out, knowing that you havent been uploading for a while but thats ok bro. Comeback whenever you feel like it

Yeah ok. Also i wanted to ask is this going to be a giganourmus harem that expand infinite like the universe?? or a decent harem with for example only 3-4 girls top from this universe and a few more in the paralel universe of AAAand so on??

Ufff thats so long xD

Btw remember that people will be interested not only in mc's power to create an OP "robot" army. But also because he can create an improved iron man suit. Weall know how everyone go crazy about that Suit and wanted to create their own suits, with so many versions, iron monger, Whiplash, and other knock off suits.

Np man, i rewatched the comment section again, and i agree with you, dont worry about them bro. They are probably mostly used to being let down by authors and you kinda trigger their vietnam PTSD, not gonna lie mine too. Tho they were unecesarily rude i think. Dont worry just do some scheduale to keep updating that fits you like a 3 chaps of this novel and 4 of your og novel per week, or 2/5 or minimum 1/6 if possible. Just saying this cuz its easier to drop this if you have a loong period of time absent. It happends the same when i stockpile some novels for later and i eventually forgot about them 😅

Ok first of all epic chapter, glad to see the mc and luna are finally together, which is normal consider that mc is a handsome young super hero. So excluding racist girls a lot of girls would be after him. As for the Author thoughts, man in what moment did i critize you or anything remotely close because of the noticed you give us?? I only recomended you to at least write 1 small chap per week or every 2 weeks when you have free time so it would be easier for you to come back to this novel later. Im sorry for wanting to read your novel more 🤨 i guess. I think i did respect the fact that you have a life and are free to do whatever you want. In conclusion you are free to do your Og novel, just try to update 1 chap per week or per month if you are bussy to keep this alive until you cameback.

Love the idea, just hope mc adds Fionna in the harem as one of his first members, i know its too much to add her as the first member, since its most likely that marceline or bonnibel took that place, maybe pheobe. But i still hope she is among the first 3 4 girls

Well you cant blame us bro, mostly when an author said what you are saying they ultimately end up dropping the novel. Either because they are out of ideas because of how long it has been sk ce they write a chapter. Or because they are tired of the preassure of upsating chaps behind their backs and wants to get rid of it. Im not telling you what to do, but as a recomendation to not fall into these traps, maybe try to at least upload 1 chap per week and the rest focus on your og novel. That way it would be easier for you when you decided to comeback again and focused on this novel

Up to this chap or the recent ones? I have been stockpiling chaps for later. But in the chapter i am right now that is after the timeskip, i think she is still obsessed with Hiccup even tho there is no reason for that 🤣 That night scene from the movie was hell poweefull if astrid is still obsessed with hiccup after the timeskip