Nathan_Gardner

the meteorite was on paradise island not pine city.

annnnnnnd... you lost me. too many numerical inconsistencies

i thought he didnt have the devour sequence yet? how is he doing this?

very great read, really hope that it continues. i was so hooked when i was reading this. im really looking forward to when the break is over

dude, some consistency in your names of thing a would lead to alot less confusion... like you literally just called these skills something else in the last paragraph.

noticed a few times you wrote "stated" instead of "started".

what about him leveling up but not showing his current level?

i thought it disappeared?

that must've been messy

loving it but seems to not have enough of the "system". i keep reading hoping more of the gaming system shows up but its taking so long.