_Khaled_
I like to write short fanfics since no one does the ideas that I have in my mind :)
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_Khaled_1dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วarnold?
As time went on, I could make sense of the gibberish Japanese language. I can only get simple words, but it's still better than nothing. and my name is arnold from what i could make out. Lets go I got a chad name. From my half-counting, today should mark the 15-month mark since I was born. It was at this point that I could walk around a bit, and my parents took me out a bit more than a usual stroll around the street, as we began going around the village for walking and parties. I began seeing some sort of Mount Rushmore. It had 3 heads. The nail in the coffin to knowing I was in the Naruto world was when I saw some kids practicing their substitutions jutsu in the park and the Hokage building. The Uchiha symbol clothes where I lived were not helping.- _Khaled_24dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
maiden? Really?
Lin Yi didn't respond and walked straight into the hall. Yu Niang, who was attending to the guests, changed her expression slightly after seeing him. She immediately put on a smile and leaned towards Lin Yi, "Master Lin, you're here. Which maiden will you choose tonight?" - _Khaled_26dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
Take the money from the corpses
Gu Yang returned to the caravan and said: "Dispose of the body. Also, since we encountered bandits this time, you will have to pay more when we get back." - _Khaled_27dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
should have sent to luck
Major Fate changed= 7 - _Khaled_1mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
I think namek ones don’t do that
Porunga holds up and 'OK' sign before disappearing, the Dragon Balls flying into the air and scattering throughout the planet. - _Khaled_1mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
Bro is yapping
"It's rude to point at people. Weren't you two young ladies taught manners? As for you, fellow young master with an ass for a mouth, what my battlemaid does or says has nothing to do with you. Us pair of master and servant do not value your opinion. But if you were looking for attention by bullying my maid, I do have advice for you. Next time open your mouth in a gathering where your footlickers are gathered, and you'll get it. I do not like to bicker with fools, but I made an exception just for you three. I hope this experience has been enlightening. You don't need to thank me for this. Adieu," Valerius calmly butchered the trio with his glib tongue. - _Khaled_2mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
Wasn’t he a unique demon? Why does he need to he in a dungeon
Mark's face turned cold, and he also noticed one vital aspect. The small hair that flew stuck to the javelin was instantly burned into ashes as it passed within a five-meter radius. - _Khaled_2mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว[Mind: 2.0/2.4]
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What about teaching them to hide their Ki so they wont be discovered ?
For the next few hours, I help get my family and friends settled into their new houses. They weren't all that lavish, but neither were the accommodations on Planet Vegeta, so they will be just fine. - _Khaled_2mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว"Don't forget us, Kakarot!"
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Save the good ones and the rest can perish
"There's no wrong answer. We either save Planet Vegeta or let it be destroyed. Which are you going to choose?" - _Khaled_2mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว"They're not clones." Cooler spoke, grabbing the attention of Dore and Neiz. "He's moving so fast that it appears to be multiple of him."
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Logia is an obvious NO, Paramecia like gravity, teleport,telekeesis would be good
I would like to know what your thoughts about MC getting a devil fruit is, if he should get one or not, if yes then what would be a good fit ?even non cañon fruit can be considered, please share me your thoughts on comments. - _Khaled_2mthแปะแล้ว
(Heavy Spoilers) Dislikes: -Traders: Apart from Ochirmaru the MC hasn't traded with anyone else worth noting, I would love to see him trade with Aizen or Kisuke from bleach, Dr.Gero from Dragon Ball, Frieza from Dragon ball. Or more one piece material(They were many mentions of Doffy with his nickname Joker but nothing that important) -The powers, MC through his trading system acquired many power systems(Like chakra from naruto ...) and it became very hard to keep track of all of them, I would have enjoyed it more If the story was heavily focused on famous power systems like chakra. -Unique abilites: Apart from the Sharingan the MC didn't recieve any unique ability, Anything he bought either was an item to boost his strength or a technique, In my opinion it would have been better if he bought a devil fruit or a stand or a transformation Apart from what I mentioned everything is good, the pace(I think canon just started at chapter 57) , Diaougle.... In shorter terms I hope the mc would get more unique abilites and trade with anyone noteworthy other than the snake pedo
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No
"Is letting them go really a good idea?" - _Khaled_2mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
Did you forgot that you got killed?
"I'll take care of the androids for you, both in the future and if need be, in the past as well." - _Khaled_2mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
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Raditz's didn't fly up here, no, he was standing on a machine and floating upwards, very much like an elevator. - _Khaled_2mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วCh 72 Chapter 70 - Premeditated Move
- _Khaled_3mthตอบกลับถึง Fuka1
What a braindead comment, your name probably sounds complicated to them and they’d prefer something like sakauzui or something
Garp and Kuzan, wondering what Sakazuki was planning in his mind, narrowed their eyes at the man with distrust within them. - _Khaled_3mthตอบกลับถึง nightwolf2007
I think in japanese mustache is the same as beard so in reality he’s Whitemustache
"Big Mom and Kaidou's deeds have gotten out of control. Ignoring our presence, they plundered and killed every single person that they've come across, expanding their influence and asserting their dominance in the New World. And the ones who've been restricting their malicious acts weren't us, but 'Whitebeard' Edward Newgate and his pirate crew!" Sengoku gritted his teeth with evident rage,