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I'll keep reading to see what tasty interactions come in to being

They helped add some dimensionality, though a couple times they felt a bit distant, as if they weren't fully connected. I'm not sure why I felt this way, I think the pacing felt different during those times; is what I think. I approve of this use of multiple PoVs

The bittersweetness along with accuracy in how quickly relations can develop and change had it feeling rather grounded. It was an enjoyable. The stubborn brightness that shows nestled beneath/inbetween darkness/shadow, Bittersweet.

They feel right enough, I didn't have any moments of discordance to break me away from the characters and story.

They're simple-minded, their logic is simple and shifts by their environment. Most characters i read with these traits I find insufferable, not this one, this one feels justified and valid, a sign of proper writing I'd think. They're written fine even if I personally disagree with such characters, It's interesting within this narrative they're placed in, they fit.

+1

I felt it obvious that the young master aimed to kill him, he is supposedly a decrepit elderly man on the edge of his lifespan, and it could be easily explained away if they even cared to explain why they killed this old fisherman.

It doesn't follow plot, it's quite a nice fic.

Very good. Very very good. The characterization of everyone is great, the general pacing and flow is great, there is much good reason in how things happen and why, good thought. Gud Writing.

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