Alashiv

suddenly the background setting changed and characters changed ...how did luili got home and sat infront of computer not mentioned

heyy...what about the third captain....we didn't hear her speech...

story development is really good... it's hilarious and looking forward how the story develops so far..........keep up the good work author...

uncle

I liked this book for a change the FL is not reborn in time but reborn in her understanding and realised where she had gone wrong and with the capability how she would overcome the difficulties.Also, I am curious how the ML and FL will resolve their misunderstanding and get together.

so cute....he didn't demand any indecent things but a thoughtful and caring request. which will not hinder or influence her thoughts.

story is looking promising but too many mistakes in gender translation. It gets very difficult to understand whether the character is a male or female. till now I am not able to understand Li Jiangcheng charater is male or female. And there is abrupt change in the scenes. suddenly scene transfer to different location.

This is too much.....we can accept a short or no chapter but not the repeat stuff when we are purchasing privileged chapters.... please be serious while uploading the work.

correct....late upload of chapter is ok but not the repeat of words. it is disappointing.

I read twice to confirm it that means I read the same text four times 🤣