D_Class_42

thought all but one wolf was dead

unless he's the reason she got rid of servers and started doing it herself..

you never mention why the fates are having a headache..

I've only made it this far, and I'm starting to hate this story..

went from a old woman to a man

yeah I don't see this fic to be going on for long no disrespect for what you're trying to do but way to much in just one world

Pokémon tech reminds me of Naruto tech.. highly advanced but not really shown much

The overall story is alright, but the further you read, the more jumpy it gets.. The only thing I hate is how the author writes it like a day has gone by, but you learn it's actually by a week or a few months have gone by, and the MC has access to knowledge he shouldn't have or equipment that was just there.. it ruins the story

wasn't spider man just pinned down by one and about to be attacked by another

didn't they cure that side affect and where just getting ready for bigger mammal trials