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This is worth way more than that. It should be worth hundreds of millions or a few billions. It is way better than that 1 billion canon. Also, after the attack, he should have asked extra money for anything that Pierce was not aware about the price.

In this case, as a suggestion, I would recommend to make the girls busy helping the children or something like that... their scape didn't feel natural with all the people available that could kill then with one hit. Looking at the girls development/character the girls would have stopped then if not because of the plot.

Ok... why the girls let then run away? They are intelligent and I don't see any reason why they would not help. They can read the situation.

Really... agree do not disclose future information??? seems like only valid for the traitor... this is getting ridiculous!!!

Yeah... and they have disclosure information regarding Snap... why not Peter???

Seems like this fanfiction will just follow the original plot. Let's see if the Uzumaki clan will survive to confirm this.

Thank you!

The problem is that there is nothing being used for dialogue although you are using this new marks for thoughts. As a reader, it is confusing and hard to identify dialogue. I also never read a book or novel with your marks instead of quotes, so I am not sure why quotes would cause confusion for the readers. But that is ok, I don't mind and you can us any system you like. What I mind is a lack of marks for dialogues. It really makes the reading hard.

Please help to use " for dialogue and ' for thoughts.

Probably because the author needs the threat alive for his plot. I honestly don't agree with this approach, the author should not have added A if this is the end result. Also they could return to the village while she killed him. Unless the author justify this in the next chapter, that makes no sense.