MonkeyOfAle

I love it when authors force plot points, it's so great, it makes so much sense too, I too would forget important things in the story and remember random bulls**t like the name of the spell Dumbledore used to stop Harry's fall in a quiddich game.

chatgpt

ChatGPT writes like this, splits the chapter in segments and gives them a title, the author didn't bother removing them or asking it to stop puttin them in(I don't expect them to actually write their own story).

Dark doesn't mean angst contrary to popular belief, a stroy can be dark and not be angsty, I read up to chapter 9, probably didn't sync correctly because I wrote the review from my computer, he kept being angsty until chapter 8, he basically calls the other orphaned children at his orphanage fake and is kind of a dick about it, he also treats a missed interaction with Tokoyami like a big deal and beats himself up over it.

Simply unenjoyable. Too much angst throughout most of the story as it is right now.

"authors" and it's just chatgpt

iirc dawn pots are a ~30% increase in lifespan

chatgpt

Legit doesn't get more boring than this, every single letter in the story was written by some sort of LLM(very likely ChatGPT), system is boring and inconsistent, mc is boring, chapters are repetitive and most of what's written is filler.