Lame like those Chinese cultivation novel, but instead of cultivating its magic tho system is very similar to it. No character depth, no world building, below average quality writing, overall meh

she is making everything about her, lol

This doesn't make sense. she can make potions, forgemaster.. she can basically remember everything yet can't follow recipe and amount of ingredients that's needed? more bs from author. at least make it convincing

He is obviously doing it for his daughter, to help her merge her cores

seems very out of character to me, she is not family, shes not from dessert, she doesn't matter to her yet she requested tezka to let her watch and even asking her family to help her in this situation.

Since when she started to care so much about friya?

there was science on morgar?

too dramatic, lith will share it with everyone later anyways

poor plot

need more

Don't think he will go

This is why keeping a small amount of backlog chapters would've helped in rainy days. Some authors don't really care much for consistency or plan for such scenarios in mind

I hope Nico doesn't turn out to be a good guy now after recovering his unaltered memories and Arthur forgiving him.

MC is ruthless from start, by end he seem like a edge lord and cringey. Try few chapters and see for yourself

there's no harem, it's one of the reason i read it

Lith is back being a kingdom's dog with or without leash. Whats the point of being a "major"/part of army? They sending him out on front alone. He could've participated as a mercenary and coordinated with army without being part of them cuz of deal with royal. He isn't working with army anyways, they're making him dance to their tune as always. Sad character development, mc is like Japanese beta male now

Did you even read recent chapters? He used destruction infused with Regis to fight wraiths. It wasn't enough, so he used destruction without Regis to win fight. And spear is from taci which he gifted to the Lance While art was having adventures at agnoras place, lances were fighting a war obviously they will have some growth. They're using everything they have just to buy few seconds, they're nowhere close to scythe level. It was stressed how scythes are toying with them and not taking it seriously too

Lame drama as always. Lith is risking himself so she wants to risk herself too cuz logic

more than 10 chapters for golem crafting, boring man

I'm one of the earliest reader, it was a good journey, book was enjoyable even tho it wasn't perfect. I have lots of criticism, dialogues felt annoying and lifeless at times, diversity and depth was lacking, it wasn't very captivating at times, quality of writing could've been better- like use of figure of speech etc. I have praises for it as well, I felt authors passion in this book when he started out, entire journey before immortal lands were very enjoyable for me. Goodluck for future, I'll give your other book a try as well