shadowsnake_13

you're the second one that sits there and gives us your thoughts and the thoughts of Harry Potter and also why start on the 4th year if you're going to tell us the story of the first year why don't you just start out the first year give us conversations give us actions not thoughts of Harry Potter or his memories popping up because it's not that interesting it gets annoying after a while so I will be stop reading this right now at this point in time and I will also be dropping this

I'm sorry you got to add more conversation action so far you're just giving us the the view of the reader and some thoughts of Harry's the way Harry see things the way Harry thinks of things barely any conversation whatsoever and barely any action whatsoever so at this point in time I'm dropping it I'm stop reading this because the fact is there's nothing but your thoughts

you were doing so well before you told me you were going to do a jumping dimensions and universes come on now I don't mind you bringing things into the universe but no jump your main character jumping through a different universe no just no

this all part of the story was written so beautifully and well done that when Harry started crying it made me cry keep up the good work

I just realized at this point we still don't know what was his third choice for his systems thing you know the person that he chose to go after the game system

cuz at this point you're just doing stupid s*** what is this little see what people do you're know what they will do just kick it and Dumbledore out of Hogwarts if you have the power to do so

there is magic in the marvel universe or have you forgotten about the sorcerers you know the ancient One the source of supreme the whole waving their hands around they do have magic

okay you need help dude this is so f****** depressing I have depression and I wanted to read fanfics the light in my mood but this is so much that I'm on the verge of breaking down so I'm dropping it just from this get some help you need it I'm talking about therapist doctors mental hospitals if you have to I wonder how many people got so depressed they killed himself over your f****** story it's too f****** dark dude I bet you you're one of those dudes that are thinking about taking a gun outside and start shooting people get help

I like your view on this this is what I want to hear an author say the reason why they're doing this and the way you're doing it is excellent I've heard stories be changed of certain things and not give up reason to it or I've heard people repeat things repeatedly you know repeatedly like this to get their points there it's irritated but you're doing an excellent job so far at this point some people did the same thing but started to end up with those bad traits that some people don't want to or some people just went really really dark and depressing but you're doing an excellent job so far keep up good work

dude or lady whoever this author is no matter what gender or whatever you need to see a therapist big time you got some issues very deep and dark issues if you're talking like this about sexual assault and then making out everyone else like they it's fine curses and everything and then get put these questionnaires up because you get responses like this one you're getting now I'm sorry everyone's going to be pissed because when they read a story there's going to be some killing there's going to be some things but sexual assault against compared to killing the worst thing that could be is the sexual assault because the victim has to live with it killing the victims dead they're suffering is over with there's a difference you dark f*** get some help that's why everyone's dropping it because they don't want to go insane or in a depression because of you