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Goodbye Taz. I’ll never forget all the times we spent together while I read So many stories I’ll never get to finish I’m not ready

2019-02-09 เข้าร่วมแล้วUnited States
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    Will Kaizen always be cold and detached? I don’t mind ruthless pragmatists but I think that Kaizen could actually build some relationships in a world like Naruto’s. If nothing else he could build professional relationships with colleagues. Even if he stays single and without any family.

    Sakumo nodded, his mind briefly pondering the impression Kaizen had made on him. "I sensed something about him. He has a presence that's unusual for someone his age. I want you to befriend him, Kakashi. He seems like someone who could push you to become better, just as you could push him."
    The Silent Tide: A Naruto Fanfiction
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    Gonna add an eyepatch to the cover now?

    Ch 106 Chapter 105: Kurogane Clan
    Naruto: Mixed Heritage(Rewrite)
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    I’m confused. Who’s this story about?

    Ch 2 Chapter One
    JJK: Just A Human
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    I thought of using water’s light reflecting property to create a coating that turns the user invisible. Another idea was to make water style version of the Raikage chakra cloak. It would basically be a jutsu version of Noelle Silva’s Valkyrie Dreas spell. The next one was a jutsu that’s based on water clones where the user can grow extra limbs made of water to fight multiple people at once. The last jutsu idea I had was a water style version of the samurai’s chakra coating. It would be like how Sasuke coated his sword with lightning only Kaizen would coat his blade in water while spinning it, basically like a chainsaw blade made of water. It could even be extended and shortened to suprise enemies.

    Kaizen experimented with different approaches. He would suddenly accelerate, then stop abruptly, hoping to catch Kakashi off guard. When that didn't work, he tried circling around, attempting to force Kakashi into a corner. But Kakashi was always one step ahead, his eyes never losing sight of Kaizen, reading his intentions with uncanny accuracy.
    The Silent Tide: A Naruto Fanfiction
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    Since you plan to have your character use water style as his main element, do you have any plans for him to create unique water style jutsu? Cus I have a few ideas for some if you want to use them.

    Kaizen experimented with different approaches. He would suddenly accelerate, then stop abruptly, hoping to catch Kakashi off guard. When that didn't work, he tried circling around, attempting to force Kakashi into a corner. But Kakashi was always one step ahead, his eyes never losing sight of Kaizen, reading his intentions with uncanny accuracy.
    The Silent Tide: A Naruto Fanfiction
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    Why not call them Inscriptions or Seals?

    "Let's just call this Kanji Runes while I call my runes Primordial Runes to avoid confusion"
    STB: Runes and Vampires
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    If you go with an elemental theme and give him different elements from his next 2 techniques I would like to request he gets wind and earth elements next. If you do those elements then you can have him gain a skill that lets him use all three elements at the same time. And Fire,Wind and Earth fuse to make

    Ch 41 Divine gaze
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    OOH OOH OOH!! Can Alex make a cursed tool version of the Floo Network from Harry Potter. Given Hestia’s divinity over the Hearth it could be possible to make one with her help. He could make one Mother Hearth by the dungeon entrance and make Lesser Hearths to be taken to the Safe Zones in the dungeon. The Mother Hearth would hold all the divinity to prevent the dungeon from going psychotic but this could allow fast travel to the lower floors. It would only work one way though since it would need some divinity to actually connect to the other hearths and Gods aren’t allowed to activate their power in the dungeon. The Mother Hearth would be activated by a god selecting a lesser hearth and giving a drop of blood to power and connect the Mother Hearth to it.

    His magic was also not as simple as he made it appear at first glance. There was something about it that made me nervous for some reason and the things that could truly accomplish that were few. It was a beautiful manifestation of blue and black flames that I theorized might be transmutative in nature and thus dangerous for us gods. It was something only us older gods knew but with our divinities restrained in these mortal frames we were very susceptible to transmutation as while not our divine forms these bodies were tied to them.-
    Danmachi-Hell's forge
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    I wonder what his next cursed technique will be.

    Ch 41 Divine gaze
    Danmachi-Hell's forge
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    Could be. It’s a gif that pops up when you search Shuten Douji on this app.

    "Also I will be willing to make the Youkai Faction stronger by not only making Yasaka and Kunou stronger but I will also release Shuten Douji, Otakemau and Tamamo-no-Mae from the Five Principal Clans. This way you guys won't be seen as an easy target any longer." Rias added to sweeten the deal.
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    Uuuh. Why did he assume there weren’t any runes? Wouldn’t it make more sense for runes to be a highly guarded secret in a supernatural world?

    He's also confused about the world he's currently in, since the place he's currently at is called Itogami Island, and it is a demon sanctuary that is under Japan.
    STB: Runes and Vampires
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    Shute douji

    "Also I will be willing to make the Youkai Faction stronger by not only making Yasaka and Kunou stronger but I will also release Shuten Douji, Otakemau and Tamamo-no-Mae from the Five Principal Clans. This way you guys won't be seen as an easy target any longer." Rias added to sweeten the deal.
    Reborn In DxD As Rias Gremory With Rimuru’s Overpowered Powers
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    Personally I think an evolution would have made her a full blooded fallen

    Shuri evolved from a two-winged half Fallen Angel into a twelve-winged half Fallen Angel that's much more powerful than a normal twelve-winged. It's also not including the amount of training Shuri was put through by Rias over the years.
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    You know, with this level of depravity in this AU, why not just take riser as a spouse? Then Rias can use her naming ability to turn Riser into Risa or something to gender end him into a woman and claim his whole harem for Rias to use

    Under such a heavenly assault, it took Shuri less than 5 minutes to bring Rias to her orgasm.
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    I wonder what kid of alcohol he could make

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    I think this one is more like a visible projection that comes first while the real attack comes after.

    Mimicking my caterpillar didn't net me any positives besides a creative new way to use chakra to attack. It was basically just punching or kinking and following the physical attack with a projected fist or foot made out of chakra like an echo, I called it chakra lag. It was nastily effective too if my opponent didn't know about it before hand as after dodging the physical attack most people relaxed their guards subconsciously since there was a time gap before I could attack again. It was small but everyone had the same problem which was what made the echo that came during that gap devastating.-
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    How do you use the same hand seal twice in a row? Do you hold it for extra time or do you pull your hands a part and put them back together?

    For the earth line of jutsu there were from lowest to highest rank five, seven and eleven hand signs needed to gain initial mastery of them that built off of the original five. It was Tiger, Hare, Boar, Boar, Dog for the E rank mole jutsu. Tiger, Hare, Boar, Boar, Dog, Tiger, Rat for the D rank headhunter jutsu. Tiger, Hare, Boar, Boar, Dog, Tiger, Rat, Hare, Snake, Rat, Boar for the hiding like a mole jutsu. Thankfully the hand signs weren't strictly necessary so long as one could remember the way the chakra was molded by using them. Since the jutsu weren't complex this meant the molding was also not very complex.-
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    I swear I feel like he will specialize in water and earth style later. Mizuyama=water mountain

    "Kenzo Mizuyama." I introduced myself but didn't take my eyes off the woman as I sat down at the table.
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    ??? Tenten Lee and Neji are all supposed to be a year ahead of the rookie 9

    Naruto, Ino, Sakura, Sasuke, Tenten, Rock Lee, Hinata, Neji, Shikamaru, Kiba, Shino and Choji. The rest of our classmates were boring and plain so I forgot about them as soon as they introduced themselves. Even amongst the twelve I did remember the names of the only ones I really didn't have trouble ignoring the existence of was Naruto, Sasuke, Kiba and Shino. Naruto for obvious reasons , Sasuke because he was a pain in my backside after Teacher Iruka pointed out I wasn't taking him seriously in our spars. Kiba and Shino because they were "family" according to my parents and regularly came over after their own parents learned we were in the same class.-
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    Seriously? Man this is gonna take forever

    What I didn't say was that I could FEEL the fact that this was the limit as my body felt bloated and strained right after the update. It wasn't a full body bloat either but more along the lines of having overeaten by a bit and the food having expanded in your stomach. Uncomfortable but manageable none the less. Knowing what the true limit was i now needed to raise my other stats to it before leveling up immediately or risk my vessel exploding.-
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