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_Gie

_Gie

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2019-01-25 เข้าร่วมแล้วUnited States
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  • _Gie
    _Gie11mth
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    What can I say? Let me start with the bad. First off, there are minor errors the author should work on to better improve this story. Though they don't really affect the general point of the story. Author should work on the world background and character design too. Before I continue on the good, I would like to say there was a review I saw that talked about how this book had both the eastern power level and a bit of western ideas. To be honest I read this book because of that review. I was curious at how the author did it and I'm glad I read this book. The story is developing quite well. Sometimes you read a book and it's like it's moving too fast or too slow but this isn't like that to me. The writing quality is on an okay level to me The storyline is good, I find the main character Hiro to be strange but intriguing to follow. So far my favorite character will be Lu Dei, though he had little screen or novel time. I hope the author plans extending that in the future. Well there's another person whose actions I find strange. Ming Lu, I'm going to watch her. All in all this is good book to read and you should check it out. Don't worry, you won't regret it

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  • _Gie
    _Gie11mth
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    😆

    "Don't worry I'll make him marry me," Mi'er continues to rub her cheek against his arm. "You are going to love me back someday,"
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    _Gie11mth
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    😂🤧

    "Sweet round balls!"
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  • _Gie
    _Gie11mth
    ตอบกลับถึง mattfuncool

    Lol 😂 I wasn’t the only one who noticed

    3. Sweet Round Balls!
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    _Gie11mth
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    Stage?

    ย่อหน้านี้ถูกลบแล้ว
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    _Gie11mth
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    🤧

    "Haha, Hiro means abundant. You displayed abundant of strength back then,"
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    _Gie11mth
    ตอบกลับถึง Lawrence_Oshim

    It’s nice actually

    It was darker than the night sky, devoid of stars on a cold night. Yet it was as hot as summer. His consciousness lingered in this dark place, with no aim or destination. Moving about freely, like the wind.
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