ZombiePat

World background: 5(it's ATLA) Updating stability: meh Character design: definitely not great. you are actually hurting the character's design. story development: Wack, started off great went to trash fast. I know it's an AU but it just feels like a completely different universe with completely different laws and power systems. maybe it's just me. writing quality: in my opinion not bad, I would even go as far as to say it's great.

the comments have already said my part. good day

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this is my first hxh so that "always" means there are more ff of it can you recommend some that you know?

dear god don't let her die, please! not this time!