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ngl im starting to get fed up by the description of "50 to 60 years old man" could have used a better words than this tho..anyways back to read

ah understandable. It is okay for me. Good luck in your works!

now that i read this again, :D is sus

keep up the good work! cant wait for the surprises you will show to us

Thoughtful and honest review after 3 chapters into reading.... honestly, i could not bear to read the next chapter after reading the prologue but i manage to read until chapter3. The writing quality, The title and the synopsis caught my eye while i am in a novel hunting mode. This made me think..'ooh interesting but why is there only 1 review?' I can tell you did not put much effort to write the prologue as there was almost no description or anyway to help me understand the story other than the conversations. The conversations are also very confusing for me to read. What makes me so speechless is the "what do you want?". Just how could the mc say that to her mother as she is desperately try protect them (1 star however i will do it 0 star tbh). About the grammar, i have already gave up. story development: 0 to 100 real quick. You need to build the story step by step. be steady~...2 stars character design: 2D characters with little or none in depth to their personalities at all (maybe there is)...3 stars i understand that you are new but still..the effort- anyways, good luck to you author~

hi, is there harem in this novel? pls say no :3

OOOOH interesting.

anyway, if you love stories like this, i recommend you to try read little prince in the ossuary. This is my favorite psychological dark story (can be disturbing)..it is confusing at first but after few chapters, you will understand. check it out in NOVEL UPDATES

exactly!

3 chapters into the novel and my urge to write a review after years of inactivity is kicking me now. First of all, I would like to express my gratitude for the original idea of this novel. I have fed up with system stories so for me to be able to finally read such an original story, I guess this is my lucky day :D *Writing quality: unique writing style i like it..5 stars *Stability of Updates*: checking the releases of the chapters...hmmm nice..5 stars My only wish for the author, quality comes first before quantity so I don't mind for like 2-3 chapters releases in a week (for example) as long as the story retains the excitement I have now but if none, hehe~ :D🥄 (imagine the spoon as a knife) *Story development*: I must say that in these three chapters, the author is taking a step by step approach very carefully to develop the story. I even imagine some scenes happening in my head. YESSHHH....5 stars Btw i also like the idea of good and bad side. The boy's family have been doing some deed like killing demons who was considered threat to them. The promised neverland vibes hit me. "are the bad guys bad? are the good guys good?" these questions keep popping out of my head. The thoughts and consideration poured into this novel earned you a spot in my library. *Character design*: as I am only in the first 3 chapters, I do not understand the characters deep enough. But since Im liking the characters...5 stars *World development*: ORIGINAL IDEA. no system. thank you :3 I love dark stories like this and I hope that I can learn more about the characters in this novel. I want to know their story through their own view. Hehe I try to write an honest review without spoilers, so this takes me some time. Go easy on me ye (edit: changed from 4 stars of writing quality to 5 stars)