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He’s a wizard not a scientist! How would he know about creating muggle inventions?! I want to understand the logic behind your idea.
These Strange sentences at the end scream AI.
You probably write a draft give it to the Ai for improvement, and post the result.
I recommend using another Program to in Ai the text and make it more authentic is a bit extra work but much more enjoyable to read.
Keep it up the start is great.
That is like a Goku vs. Beerus Situation! Unless you make a complete ark about it it wouldn’t work. See, the most OP stands in JoJo failed against Star P because of him suddenly seizing an opportunity, or struggling until he finds the strength to win, and even against Dio. It only got to that point of Dio losing because he messed around instead of just cutting off his head. Made in Heaven on the other hand did not give him the many opportunities to adapt and create key moments to turn the game. My assumption is the power works based on struggle the harder the struggle the more likely to win against the odds. Against a Sniper 0% chance, but if the sniper fails his first shot, Star P raises the odds of winning by 10-15%, and if he manages to stay in the game it scales to more than 100% basically guaranteed win.
Well, there are 8 billion people on this planet, right?! So, by your expectations I ought to write a story that fits into 8 billion people’s views, right?! Because if I can’t manage that then what I write is worth a bad review. I always wonder why people need to prove they’re idiots. I mean what you can judge is grammar, world building, and character development, update release and so on. Okay, so you don’t like rituals and the MC, well, that is 3 Stars for characters and world building, but do you have to like them?! The MC is a prick so you not liking him is well intended, and does he go through character development?! Yes, he does! He loses his family because he is a prick, and he loses his lover too for the same reason. Anyway, I don’t mind the bad review because I never intended for this story to be liked by everyone, but I am simply standing outside waiting for my turn to visit the doctor, and thought I might as well reply and waste some time on one of my haters.
Honestly I don’t like it. It is obviously an MTL, but the guy publishing it doesn’t even read it, or edit before posting it. The only good point is there is no word count chapter.
Yeah, right! Let’s go through with your glorious evolution, and next thing you know some douchebag is railing you wife/Sister/morher because he is an alpha! Or even better crime goes through the roof because now people have real powers, and unless you’re an armed military official you wil die being clawed at. Also bye bye democracy as who Gives a crap about what weaklings have to say. Also bye bye taxi drivers and modern amenities as nobody will be willing to work low paying jobs if they can get rich by taking it by force. Society as a whole will change from one of education and meritocracy to a savage one. Glorious devolution rather than evolution
🤦🏽♂️ dumbness alert!? Giving people power through airborne infection! What do you think is going to happen?!
Show don’t tell. That’s the basic requirement.
You know I wrote a long comment, but then decided to simply delete it! Always some idiot who is unable to simply read a comment and get what the commentator is saying, and so I give up. There are too many of you around to argue with. So you have won transmigration Reincarnation all of it shove it up your bum, and let me have my peace. If you’re too dumb to use google properly then that is it.