how is he wrapped like a cocoon when his legs and arms are bounded to the chair??

I thought he already learnt stage three? Leo already learnt stage three too next is four!

I have sent my reply, open it to know more about my intentions. Thanks again. You too!

Hi, sorry for replying late, I am still in doubt, whether what you said is legit or not? Besides I don't think this book is worth much, it has too many mistakes. And I don't have a ready to publish story right now. Since I am still busy with my other book.

No, I already knew that. Warning should be changed to the verb ''inform"

Warning??

who the heck is Ji Buwang?

What? I didn't understand!

Haha Busted !!!! Eno, you old fool!

The concept and the plot so far is interesting, I think this book will be successful in the near future. English is at the elementary level, I think you might be a better writer in your native language and you should switch to a more accurate translator. Google may have a cheap, easy to use translator but errors are common.

Master, you overworked yourself again!

Master, you overworked yourself again!

You should just end the dialogue with ''he doesn't force us to do anything."

Typing error!

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Whoah! Even though it may seem less sincere, but happy birthday, and best wishes!!🎂🎊 Who knows what the future holds, but all we can do is raise our head and hope that tommorow is a going to be better day and strive everyday, working on our dreams! Peace and Love,

Something is wrong with this dialogue !

'some fresh air' 'faint smile'

Okay but then why did you write 'parents' instead of 'family members' in the previous paragraph?

Needs work but I like the story so don't be disheartened by my comments, we all make mistakes. All we can do is learn from them and make sure not to repeat them again!